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Gold On the Horizon

The sun has lifted 
the weight of my day,
and sweeps gloom away,
burnishing each cloud
with bright golden rays

A dreary day,
and weary me,
finds glory in
divine display

Gold unfolds,
over the
horizon...

where I
see the

light


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Inspired By Dr. Ram's Contest: "Hope"  Diminished Hexaverse
1/8/15

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2015

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 1/23/2015 10:15:00 PM Beautiful imagery with your inspiring words, Carrie...congrats to you on your BIG win!! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 1/21/2015 11:34:00 PM So sweet Carrie,congrats on the win...huggs Login to Reply

Seren Roberts Date: 1/21/2015 12:34:00 AM Congrats on your top spot ....Seren Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/20/2015 2:28:00 PM ((())) Way to go. Congrats. SK Login to Reply

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 1/20/2015 5:24:00 AM Congratulations Carrie on win. Love Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 1/20/2015 4:06:00 AM Congrats to your awesome win Carrie! ^_^ Login to Reply

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/20/2015 3:40:00 AM congratulations Carrie.. :) Sunshines always make my day and indeed for me my symbolism of God's hope.. new day eh.. :)! ---olive eloisa Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 1/19/2015 9:33:00 PM Superb write Carrie! Congrats on top place win! Login to Reply

David Fisher Date: 1/19/2015 7:19:00 PM Way to go on this contest. You captured hope's essence. Login to Reply

Reason A. Poteet Date: 1/19/2015 5:30:00 PM Sunsets, Sunrises, Gold on the Horizon. I especially like the balanced alliteration in "dreary day" and "divine display" Congratulations, Carrie. Login to Reply

Verlena S. Walker Date: 1/19/2015 12:23:00 PM Congratulations on your high marks Carrie. Well done! Verlena Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2015 12:19:00 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 1/19/2015 10:59:00 AM Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating. I look forward for your contribution for the new contest Dizain Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/19/2015 10:12:00 AM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 1/19/2015 9:30:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved top win Carrie. A very enjoyable read. Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 1/19/2015 8:17:00 AM Carrie, congratulations on your top win for your powerful poem of hope. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 1/17/2015 9:47:00 AM Excellent, Carrie! What a lovely picture you paint...and how positive it all sounds! a very worthy entry! Hope you're having a lovely weekend. // paul Login to Reply

Verlena S. Walker Date: 1/10/2015 6:12:00 PM Splendid... Beautifully written Carrie... GL in the contest... Verlena Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 1/8/2015 9:52:00 PM Wonderful write Carrie,, a true paint,,love the title !great work! gl in contest! Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 1/8/2015 6:06:00 PM You are a ray of hope to many with such comforting words.You are like the sun on the horizon sweet one..Beautiful! Login to Reply

David Meade Date: 1/8/2015 5:40:00 PM Wonderful, may you always have light, hope and love. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 1/8/2015 5:24:00 PM Oh doesn't it lift your spirits when the sun shines - love this write Carrie - good luck in the contest a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply