Carrie Richards Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Gold On the Horizon

The sun has lifted 
the weight of my day,
and sweeps gloom away,
burnishing each cloud
with bright golden rays

A dreary day,
and weary me,
finds glory in
divine display

Gold unfolds,
over the
horizon...

where I
see the

light


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Inspired By Dr. Ram's Contest: "Hope"  Diminished Hexaverse
1/8/15

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 23, 2015 at 10:15 PM Beautiful imagery with your inspiring words, Carrie...congrats to you on your BIG win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Kayod5 Kayode January 21, 2015 at 11:34 PM So sweet Carrie,congrats on the win...huggs

Seren Roberts January 21, 2015 at 12:34 AM Congrats on your top spot ....Seren

Sara Kendrick January 20, 2015 at 2:28 PM ((())) Way to go. Congrats. SK

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 20, 2015 at 5:24 AM Congratulations Carrie on win. Love

Teddy Kimathi January 20, 2015 at 4:06 AM Congrats to your awesome win Carrie! ^_^

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 20, 2015 at 3:40 AM congratulations Carrie.. :) Sunshines always make my day and indeed for me my symbolism of God's hope.. new day eh.. :)! ---olive eloisa

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 19, 2015 at 9:33 PM Superb write Carrie! Congrats on top place win!

David Fisher January 19, 2015 at 7:19 PM Way to go on this contest. You captured hope's essence.

Reason A. Poteet January 19, 2015 at 5:30 PM Sunsets, Sunrises, Gold on the Horizon. I especially like the balanced alliteration in "dreary day" and "divine display" Congratulations, Carrie.

Verlena S. Walker January 19, 2015 at 12:23 PM Congratulations on your high marks Carrie. Well done! Verlena

Jan Allison January 19, 2015 at 12:19 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta January 19, 2015 at 10:59 AM Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for participating. I look forward for your contribution for the new contest Dizain

Debbie Guzzi January 19, 2015 at 10:12 AM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Brenda Meier-Hans January 19, 2015 at 9:30 AM Congratulations on your well deserved top win Carrie. A very enjoyable read.

Sandra Haight January 19, 2015 at 8:17 AM Carrie, congratulations on your top win for your powerful poem of hope. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus January 17, 2015 at 9:47 AM Excellent, Carrie! What a lovely picture you paint...and how positive it all sounds! a very worthy entry! Hope you're having a lovely weekend. // paul

Verlena S. Walker January 10, 2015 at 6:12 PM Splendid... Beautifully written Carrie... GL in the contest... Verlena

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 8, 2015 at 9:52 PM Wonderful write Carrie,, a true paint,,love the title !great work! gl in contest!

Charmaine Chircop January 8, 2015 at 6:06 PM You are a ray of hope to many with such comforting words.You are like the sun on the horizon sweet one..Beautiful!

David Meade January 8, 2015 at 5:40 PM Wonderful, may you always have light, hope and love.

Jan Allison January 8, 2015 at 5:24 PM Oh doesn't it lift your spirits when the sun shines - love this write Carrie - good luck in the contest a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx