Gold and Silver Skies

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Written August 15, 2023
For Contest “A Natural Ninette”
Sponsor, Kim Merryman

sun at dawn fills the sky with gold delight till its setting time when it bows to silver glow of pearl moon

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/21/2023 11:05:00 AM

Beautiful image Sandra. Congratulations! :)

Terry Miller

Date: 8/21/2023 2:01:00 AM

Beautiful ninette; congratulations

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2023 1:29:00 PM

Congratulations!! Way to go with this excellent winner. Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 8/20/2023 7:17:00 AM

Sun and moon how beautiful! I always love a sun and moon poem and you’ve used it so beautifully here in your ninette. Well deserved win. Gold and silver so well articulated. Congratulations on being placed as a winner

Lin Lane

Date: 8/20/2023 5:56:00 AM

Beautifully written, Sandra. Congratulations.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/19/2023 6:32:00 PM

Great description, Sandra, congratulations:)

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/19/2023 2:45:00 PM

Sandra, love the contrast of "gold delight" and "silver glow of pearl moon" Beautiful! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/16/2023 6:01:00 PM

ove the silver glow of pearl moom