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Gold - Poof It Is Gone

The morning bright sunlight in the sky, gold rays reach far and wide. After a mighty storm, leaves make a gold carpet to walk upon. Pretty flowers are opening up, gold is exploding over the hills and fields. Nature's gold will not last, watch it when you can~poof it is gone. Date Written: 2/20/2023

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Deb M

Date: 2/23/2023 2:02:00 AM

I really enjoyed this Paula….love the line “leaves make a gold carpet to walk upon” Lovely Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 2:32:00 PM

Thank You for writing. Glad you enjoyed my "Gold" write. Nature makes the prettiest gold carpet. Have a great day writing away............................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/20/2023 7:56:00 PM

Nature's gold lasts longer than mine ever did. lol. Here's to a copper in our cups.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 2:29:00 PM

Thank You for writing. I think nature is smarter than people are. Yes, to a copper cup. Have a great day writing away............................

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/20/2023 7:45:00 PM

Amen, grab ahold of the treasures within which will remain: )

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/23/2023 2:27:00 PM

Thank You for /writing. You are right, one needs to hold on to the treasures within. That is where the real gold can be found. Have a great day writing away............................