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Going To the Chapel of Love - Tb

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Than-Baulk Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 11/04/23

They share a kiss wedded bliss. She’s not miss from now!

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/27/2023 4:02:00 PM

So fun, playful and whimsical, Jan! Love your conclusion! Perfect ending! Well done. Your sense of humor is such a beautiful gift in the smiles that you bring! Blessings my friend as Christmas approaches on wings!!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/17/2023 8:50:00 PM

I saw the Shirelles at a fair years ago. So much fun! Congratulations!

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/17/2023 1:07:00 PM

I had to put the horse back in front of the cart with this one after eyeing your comments below. 'Twas thanks to Andrea's, oh Isle of Miss, Jan. Cheers for your win and my smile. Aloha, William

Charles Messina

Date: 11/17/2023 4:29:00 AM

Love it, Jan. They had so many great hits. Congratulations on your win! PS: And thank you for putting that song in my head, I've been singing all morning (lol)...One of my mum's favorite songs :) Hugs Charlie xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2023 6:47:00 PM

Oh dang. I think I forgot to put Tb on mine. Crap

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2023 2:09:00 PM

Way to go with this one. These are not as easy as thy look. I had to think a bit what you meant on line three. Maybe if you capitalize it or put "Miss" in quotation marks it will be super clear.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/6/2023 8:47:00 AM

Clever poem for the contest Jan, good luck. I remember this song so well. I hope you and the family are doing well. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jeff Connelly

Date: 11/4/2023 5:52:00 PM

Wonderful wordplay Jan. Thanks

Eve Roper

Date: 11/4/2023 9:37:00 AM

Cute one, Jan. Hope you and your husband are doing well. How is your son progressing in school. Enjoyed reading my friend. Stay safe have a nice weekend.

Mark Hughes

Date: 11/4/2023 9:26:00 AM

Good luck in the contest Jan!

Lin Lane

Date: 11/4/2023 9:09:00 AM

I haven't written one of these is such a long time... you wrote a very good contender, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/4/2023 9:22:00 AM

I've only written a few Lin, you know how hard i find to write romance lol I have another one I'm working on but funny lol:-) hugs Jan xx