Going Round In Circles

I know it's there somewhere Said the dog with a wail As she runs round in circles Trying to catch her tail If I stand quite still .....maybe It will curl around... I will peep Sadly being a happy dog it wasn't to be It is only still.... when she's asleep
Penned 23/08/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Manassian Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 10:58 PM
:) Lovely piece, dear. So easy to get a visual of this. I don't know how dogs think that they can ever catch their tails. Thanks for your visit to my blog. Much appreciated.
Sergi Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 5:29 PM
Great poem, Seren! A sad circumstance for dogs.
Roberts Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Thx Ralph for commenting.....Seren
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 1:00 PM
absolutely delightful Seren, I do love this cute tale or is it tail lol:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 9:52 AM
Dogs do the silliest things, but they love unconditionally. This would make a cute little ditty.
Smith Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Lol....she will learn after a few bites
Roberts Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Nah Tim she is thick...lol
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