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Going Round In Circles

I know it's there somewhere Said the dog with a wail As she runs round in circles Trying to catch her tail If I stand quite still .....maybe It will curl around... I will peep Sadly being a happy dog it wasn't to be It is only still.... when she's asleep
Penned 23/08/2017

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Date: 8/23/2017 10:58:00 PM
:) Lovely piece, dear. So easy to get a visual of this. I don't know how dogs think that they can ever catch their tails. Thanks for your visit to my blog. Much appreciated.
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Date: 8/23/2017 5:29:00 PM
Great poem, Seren! A sad circumstance for dogs.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/1/2017 8:02:00 PM
Thx Ralph for commenting.....Seren
Date: 8/23/2017 1:00:00 PM
absolutely delightful Seren, I do love this cute tale or is it tail lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/23/2017 9:52:00 AM
Dogs do the silliest things, but they love unconditionally. This would make a cute little ditty.
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Date: 8/23/2017 9:31:00 AM
Lol....she will learn after a few bites
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/23/2017 9:38:00 AM
Nah Tim she is thick...lol

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