David Kavanagh Poet Rhyme

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Going Out With a Bang

Going out with a bang 

       Dancing in circles weighing each other down 
       Listless yet buoyant, in our oversized gowns 
       Space waltzes are draining, swirling all night 
       By morning we’d merged, in supernova light 



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05/21/23

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Valsa George June 1, 2023 at 7:08 PM The astral phenomena are breathtaking and wonderful ! Cosmos is so full of astounding mysteries and delights ! A crisp and sweet poem. Great image too. All the Best, dear David.

I Am Anaya May 22, 2023 at 5:20 PM A real blast, light-years away, the kind of event that produces as much as half of the universe’s gold, platinum, uranium and mercury, experts say. Exhausting and yet worth the weight in gold! A perfect romantic Bitesize David Kavanagh May 23, 2023 at 2:43 AM Yes indeed Anaya, all the rare heavy elements are produced in supernovae explosions, what a universe we live in, one big self serving science lab, or is some entity running a colossal experiment! Beats me! cheers David

Victor Buhagiar May 22, 2023 at 1:32 AM Brilliant. Short and sweet. David Kavanagh May 22, 2023 at 5:55 AM Thank you Victor, it’s the way I’d prefer to go, cheers David

Jay Narain May 21, 2023 at 10:44 AM A cosmic delight, David Kavanagh May 21, 2023 at 10:51 AM Thank you Jay, irresistible in every sense, cheers David

Lin Lane May 21, 2023 at 10:25 AM A grandiose celestial event. Dancing in fevered anticipation through the night until two bodies were joined as one. Awesomely captured by Earthly voyeurs. David Kavanagh May 21, 2023 at 10:50 AM Heya Lin, Party’s, they don’t get much bigger on a cosmic scale, and they certainly do it with style, way to go, cheers David