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Going On Emotion

Going on emotion, a boxer reels and fights his final round. Punch-drunk and bloody, his heart as big as Texas, he struggles on to land that lucky strike A mother counting pennies tries to stretch her budget for another cotton blanket for her tiny baby boy, he's just three months, the little tyke! A street musician with his violin tries to pay his way through college, plays the subways and the coffee shops, his hopes are high 'til a Copper tells the kid to take a hike! A paraplegic in his wheelchair doing wheelies in the hallways of the County General Hospital and flirting with the nurses, in many ways they're all alike. They're going on emotion, and 'no' is not a part of their vocabulary!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/24/2012 8:40:00 AM
VERY positive message. Wish I could be more like the characters in your poem. Not letting one thing get me down! YOu did a very nice inspirational one that also was very interesting to read.
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Date: 6/24/2012 8:34:00 AM
A very intriguing theme,Keith.I like it very much..I like to write about such issues.Best wishes,Kate
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Date: 6/22/2012 12:31:00 PM
That we should all have this kind of courage. Takes a brave soul to deal with adversity this way. Reminds me of how much I have to be thankful for.
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Date: 6/22/2012 2:40:00 AM
HAHA very heartwarming and VERY inspirational... it made me smile and reconsider somethings. I enjoy reading you poetry, Keith <3
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Date: 6/21/2012 11:30:00 PM
great imagery in this thought provoking piece
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