Going Home

 free verse or poetry prose 

Hey Sis,
next Monday I'm going home again
It's been fifty or more years
I've lost count.
I can still taste the dust of
traveling with the car windows down.
Do you remember the few times our older
brother would let one of us 
open and close the cattle gates
once we got off the main road?
There were at least three double 
stops and starts along the way.

Do you remember the gray ramshackle house,
which won't be there I am sure.
Do you remember the old well, which 
will be filled in or at least covered.
First thing, I will check the cemetery for the
graves of our great aunts who were
still living when we last visited the farm.

Next week, I will find the graveyard
has now been fenced with our surname on the
gate.  I have seen pictures on the Internet.  
I will check for great-granddaddy's 
stone which I have seen but don't
remember.  There won't be any
stops and starts for there is a new lane
called Cemetery Lane which looks to be
graveled and well-kept.

When I get back home I will call you
and tell you about the trip and all the
new things I will have discovered going home
again. You will ask a hundred or more 
questions which I won't be able to answer.
  
Don't anyone tell me you can't go home again.  
I'm going, knowing it won't be the same
but confident it will be well-worth the trip to
find what has changed.

written 25/Sep/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Trichet Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Stunning, stunning, magnifico...Congrats on such a wonderful write R A P
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September 26, 2014 at 9:54 PM
Magnificent write Reason n so is the win! Huge congrats!
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September 26, 2014 at 9:33 PM
Congratulations and visit the blog on this contest if you choose to ... Love and prayers, Gina
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September 26, 2014 at 9:15 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 6:22 PM
wonderful memories It's amazing how things have changed beyond all recongition in the intervening years since you last visited :- many congrats Hugs jan xxx
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September 26, 2014 at 4:56 PM
I am so happy to see this lovely poem here Reason. Congratulations on your win with your beautiful treasure.
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September 25, 2014 at 9:38 PM
This is beautiful Reason. It is so touching and I could just see you stopping to open gates and driving the old dirt roads. Such beautiful memories.
Poteet Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 3:10 PM
Thank you, Brenda, it is a true story and perhaps I'll have another piece to write when I return on Monday. The farm is only about an hour (hour & half) from here but I just never went back after I went away to college. I am excited.
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