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Going, Going, Green

It's a quiet place, beneath a grassy hill,
Where the moonlight spills on whippoorwill.

And flowers of apricot, maroon and mauve,
Crowd the blues and yellows, at sunlit cove.

On a large flat rock, at the watery edge,
I'm at golden hour, feet dangling a ledge,

Scents of sea and summer blended with sun,
Permeate the moments, like sunset visions.

This is my sanctuary, my cove by the sea,
A place of green butterflies and honeybee.

I go there to meditate in the sunlit bliss,
And at times to encounter firefly reminisce!

Often I will sketch the gorgeous scenery, 
Lost to this world in an ocean of greenery.


Written on August 17, 2020
For: Sanctuary Poetry contest
Sponsored by: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 3:19 PM
Back with congrats to you, Evelyn, on your winner in the contest with your special, sacred sanctuary. Blessings and Bliss, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 5:17 PM
I really enjoyed this contest. Its topic and submissions (including yours), were so interesting. Thank you for your warm words and congratulations. Blessings. :)
Fowler Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 7:17 AM
This is so calming to read Evelyn. The lessons nature gives us are soothing to the soul and you capture that feeling here. Congratulations!
Buehler Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 8:38 AM
Thank you very much for your joy inspiring words, Linda. Blessings. :)
One Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 6:02 AM
Sounds lovely and nature does this to us, i find those that do not have a connection with nature, do not really understand life... lovely poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Buehler Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 10:45 AM
I suppose that is because nature is a part of us, and we are a part of it. I would like to offer my profound thanks for the honor of a placement in your amazing contest, and for your kind words. It has been an interesting and rewarding experience. :)
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 8:37 PM
I am all in favor of these kind of sanctuaries, Evelyn... For they truly are sacred, as you've poetically penned yours. Gorgeous! Thanks, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 8:45 PM
Thank you for the wonderful sentiments, Gershon. Time spent with nature is time well spent. :)
Kauffman Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 4:28 PM
Evelyn, your words just ooze peace and solitude. I love the "ocean of green!" It is a special place painted by your words. Good luck in the contest.
Buehler Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 5:30 PM
Thank you so much, Sam, for the happy thoughts and good luck wishes. I am glad this poem resonated with you. :)
Krutsinger Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 3:34 PM
This is a gorgeous sanctuary. I can smell those fragrant flowers.
Buehler Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 5:32 PM
Thank you, Caren. I think one of the nicest things about flowers is their fragrance. :)
Rose  Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 2:57 PM
Isn't it beautiful when we can dream away an hour beneath the greenery of life, and hold pen in hand, thank you for the lovely poem today, God bless .
Buehler Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 3:08 PM
It was my great pleasure! Those are surely the happiest of times, when we experience peace and joy in nature's bliss. Thank you for the lovely comment. Blessings.
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