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Going Backwards

You’re not leaving out the same way you came in Although you are leaving out like a little baby crawling You’re not going down into the ground with the same morals you were taught growing up You’re going out the world backwards, like a newborn runt pup Your daddy taught you to be decent, your mama taught you to be polite Admonishing you always to be good, and only do that which is right They told you to be a caring person, embrace another’s sadness when you see others grieve Have compassion when someone is struggling, try to help those in need But you didn’t wanna live clean, you enjoy wallowing dirty With a soul so filthy, you’re just one rotten human being When you talk to women, you’re so obnoxiously forward Got no sense of probity, no desire for propriety You’re leaving the wrong way, going out backwards But those nefarious ways have caught up to you, now you’re suffering the consequences of your bad boy attitude Hell loves a paying customer, somebody who likes buying what the devil sell Now sin sickness has overtaken you, and Dr. Feel Good says: it don’t look like you’re gonna get well No, you’re not leaving out the same way you came in — fresh and innocent Although you are leaving out like a little baby crying

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/8/2017 4:47:00 AM
You really have a way with words... You write free verse so well.. We never leave the same way we come in, regardless of the situation..
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Date: 9/7/2017 4:19:00 PM
such a thought-provoking piece which must be read by the millennials, freddie... wonderful job...huggs
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Date: 9/7/2017 2:18:00 PM
I like how you ended it as innocent as a baby crying. There are so good lines I agree with Charlie on that one. MY parents always said I was going out the world backwards. Must be from the old folks. Well written Freddie. Blessings, Janis.
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Date: 9/7/2017 1:27:00 PM
"Hell loves a paying customer" great line Freddie. Well done...
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