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Cerulean above Fan brushed with fossil, ash, silver and cloud Zephyr's northwesterly cold Hemlock seeds and broom sage tassels fly November surprises

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Sotto Poet

Date: 11/17/2022 11:56:00 AM

Expertly written, Sara. In only some lines, there are amazing visuals.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/17/2022 12:30:00 PM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the time spent here reading and taking time to comment. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/17/2022 5:04:00 AM

Exquisite imagery in just a few lines, Sara. Superbly done.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/17/2022 7:21:00 AM

Vijay, Your thoughts about my work are uplifting. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2022 1:46:00 AM

- Yes, November has many faces ... a lovely poem, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/17/2022 7:19:00 AM

Thank you for the visit with such an awesome review of my work. SK

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/17/2022 1:39:00 AM

November always surprises us.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/17/2022 4:44:00 AM

Victor, I wonder what is like on your island in November. Thanks for the visit. Sara