Paul Callus Poet Tanka

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Gogyohka

the magnetic allure
of a crescent moon
appeals to the isolation
of my soul from worldly ties
I relish the joy of gratitude

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Gogyohka is a poetry form developed by Enta Kusakabe 
in Japan and translates literally to "five-line poem." 
It is an off-shoot of the tanka form. It has no syllable rules,
and does not usually rhyme. Preferably, each line would be 
a separate, usually short, phrase.

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Suzanne Delaney November 11, 2022 at 10:21 AM Nice to hear about a new form to try, Paul: Your accompanying image is wonderful. There appears to be a bird perched on the tip of the moon. I am planning to work on a new form I found called a “Haikoum” on my vacation in Florida next week. Stay tuned. Hugs, SuZ Suzanne Delaney November 12, 2022 at 4:44 PM I couldn’t find it on the web either, Paul: It is in a book of poetry exercises I am taking to Florida with me. Title is Wingbeats 11. It is available on Amazon in a Paperback or Kindle. https://www.amazon.com/Wingbeats-II-Exercises-Practice-Poetry/dp/0984039953?asin=0984039953&revisionId=&format=4&depth=1 Paul Callus November 11, 2022 at 11:15 AM I tried looking up "Haikoum" but to no avail. So I'll be relying on you for udates :) Enjoy your vacation; I believe Florida is still quite warm at this time of year. Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Sara Kendrick November 11, 2022 at 9:38 AM Nice to be introduced to this form. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. I like the creative snapshot that accompanies this one as well. Sara

Paula Goldsmith August 16, 2022 at 12:41 PM WOW!!! What a wonderful write/picture. Thanks for adding the note at the bottom. Have a blessed day................ Paul Callus August 23, 2022 at 1:11 PM Thank you for the lovely reaction, Paula. Goodnight & blessings // paul

Bill Baker July 29, 2022 at 2:35 PM I like the form and your find use of it for this poem, Paul. The picture matched well also my friend. Bill Paul Callus August 13, 2022 at 2:44 AM Glad you enjoyed the poem, Bill. The form itself has not been highlighted on Soup. Hope this will alert others to it. Regards // paul

Phyllis Babcock July 20, 2022 at 2:33 PM I have not seen this form so thanks for the explanation. The allure of the moon and the peace of nature. Nicely written. love phyl

Jack Horne July 18, 2022 at 11:57 AM haven't come across this form of tanka before but I really love it, Paul - must try it Paul Callus July 19, 2022 at 1:55 PM Glad you enjoyed it, Jack...thank you. ~ Best regards, my friend // paul

Jennifer Proxenos July 11, 2022 at 1:12 PM What is more beautiful than the magnetic allure of a crescent moon, it satisfies the souls and sets our hearts on fire. An intense awesome Description of what a crescent moon can do, it sings to your soul and makes your heart flip - lovingly turn your wedding ring thrice and your wish will come true. Hugs, warm regards and blessings, Jennifer. Paul Callus July 15, 2022 at 1:28 PM That you, Jenny. Your insightful feedback is always appreciated. ~ Have a lovely weekend, my friend. Warm regards & blessings // paul

Timothy Ray July 10, 2022 at 9:54 AM how magical is the moon and how enchanting this poem....i call this phase the Cheshire Grin...often recall Alice in Wonderland...the beauty of such a poem as is this, we are given a path and so often in the lines, the neuropathways diverge into memories... Paul Callus July 11, 2022 at 1:56 AM Good morning, Timothy. Thank you for stopping by with most welcome comments. Enjoy the week ahead. // paul

Connie Marcum Wong July 10, 2022 at 12:50 AM An outstanding example of her form Paul. Romantic and in tune with nature. I love it! It is wonderful to be back reading poetry again. Please share this with PFT. Gorgeous! Blessings xxoo Paul Callus July 10, 2022 at 2:05 AM Good morning dear Connie! It is great to see you back home and in good spirits. I will certainly share according to your wishes :) Warm regards & Blessings // paul

Michael Tor June 30, 2022 at 8:10 PM Wonderful poem Paul. a Favorite my friend... Paul Callus July 7, 2022 at 2:08 AM Thank you for the lovely visit and fav, Michael. Best regareds, my friend. // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury June 29, 2022 at 4:48 PM Dear Paul, magical lines from you, as always are! But every time I am in awe! The poem and the image - both are stunning! Best ~ Mala Paul Callus July 7, 2022 at 2:30 PM Thank you for your generous comments, dear Mala. Your words are a source of encouragement. ~ Best regards // paul

Paulette Calasibetta June 29, 2022 at 8:38 AM "the magnetic allure of a crescent moon" speaks volumes! Beautiful, stunning and deep. :)Paulette Paul Callus July 7, 2022 at 2:31 PM Your feedback, adorned with lovely adjectives has been a delight to read, Paulette! Thank you! ~ Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley June 27, 2022 at 8:52 PM Dear Paul, it takes a special gift to bare a soul with such beautiful brevity. The masterful strokes of your inspired pen caresses the page with poetic artistry and finesse. Your last line thrills me. Warmest wishes and hugs, my eloquent friend.. ~Susan Paul Callus July 7, 2022 at 2:19 AM Thank you for your generous complimentary comments, Susan. Always a pleasure to have you visiting, my friend. Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2022 at 11:56 PM Beautiful, Paul. Paul Callus June 23, 2022 at 2:08 AM Thank you, Andrea. Have a lovely and productive day :) // paul

Gordon Mcconnell June 22, 2022 at 9:33 PM Such good wording Paul, matched only with the picture it creates of separation from this world. Trust all is well with you in these days, blessings always,Gordon Paul Callus July 9, 2022 at 4:07 AM Thank you for the feedback, Gordon. ~ Life has been ultra busy...weather too hot at times, but I'm not grumbling :) Regards & Blessings // paul

James Marshall Goff June 17, 2022 at 11:41 AM Dreamy lines Paul, very much enjoyed this unique form! Paul Callus July 9, 2022 at 4:00 AM Thank you, James. It's been only these last couple of years that I was introduced to this form; it is quite popular. Regards // paul

Karen Jones June 14, 2022 at 7:04 AM Both poem and image are beautiful! Paul Callus July 9, 2022 at 3:47 AM Glad you enjoyed, Karen....thank you! Regards // paul

Harry Horsman June 14, 2022 at 6:18 AM LOve your example, Paul... Paul Callus July 9, 2022 at 3:25 AM Thank you, Harry. Best regards // paul

Supraja Kannan June 13, 2022 at 10:25 PM Wonderful!!! Lovely imagery... So beautifully penned... Paul Callus July 9, 2022 at 3:25 AM Thank you, Supraja. May you have an enjoyable weekend. // paul

Ilene Bauer June 13, 2022 at 12:52 PM this is magical, paul! i love it! Paul Callus July 7, 2022 at 2:36 PM Thank you so much, Ilene. Best regards // paul

Vijay Pandit June 13, 2022 at 11:14 AM Beautiful photo--and a beautiful poem, Paul. Imagery succinctly conveyed. Paul Callus July 9, 2022 at 3:07 AM Thank you for reading and liking, Vijay. Have a nice weekend! // paul

Sam Kauffman June 13, 2022 at 10:38 AM Paul, what a beautiful thought - relishing the joy of gratitude. There is much to be meditated on in those words of wisdom! Thank you for sharing your mystical experience in the moon's light! Blessings! Paul Callus July 7, 2022 at 2:22 PM Thank you, Sam for reading and enjoying. Your comments are truly appreciated. Regards & Blessings // paul

Tom Cunningham June 13, 2022 at 7:40 AM I often go out on a clear night and just gaze up at the night sky and just enjoy the peace it brings. I've learnt a new word and form today. Hope you're keeping well Paul. Tom Paul Callus July 7, 2022 at 2:20 PM I'm keeping well, my friend, and hope that you are as well. Thank you for your visit and feedback, my friend. Regards // paul

Susan Lawrence June 13, 2022 at 7:36 AM Just beautiful Paul . A fav! This touched my heart. So deep and full. I can relate to your poignant words . Big hugs and blessings, Susan :) Paul Callus June 21, 2022 at 11:51 AM Thank you for the lovely comments and the fav, Susan. On rereading my poem I realize that these few lines could easily have found a place in one of your own poems! ~ warm regards and hugs // paul