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Goethe's Path: Forest a Choral Life

Along aisle of twigs, moist brown leaves and stones, Clustered bellflowers guard as I ramble Whispered chord echoes from choir of bushes groans, The rustles, a beckoning preamble Shady sky-high trees of wrinkled clothed moss Healthily exhaling thy cool fresh air. Tongue satiates divine wood spring, I doss. Finch trembles chanting rosary keys pray'rs. Built organs from pines tunes mellow reeds Gentle soothing blows invites butterflies There flights harmonious lambada speed Squirrels one fugue pitch share a lullaby Golden rays peeps through gnarled branches of trees, Casting apes acrobatic seesaw dance. Glorious forest homes choral life thee Who will dare and miss such enthralling chance? (c) Olive ELoisa 1:03am June 23, 2014 placed 4th.. :) to God be the glory.. :)

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James Fraser

Date: 12/9/2014 1:17:00 PM

This is surely a path I'd love to walk, especially with someone special. Such memories it would give, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/10/2014 6:10:00 AM

thanks much James.i sure love this poem too

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/24/2014 3:34:00 PM

Very Great poem and read here Olive!! Cheers, Gary

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/27/2014 6:41:00 AM

thanks m1uch gary.. :) GBU

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/13/2014 11:59:00 AM

Whoohoo, glad to see you on the winners list girl!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/27/2014 6:40:00 AM

thanks much Cassie :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/12/2014 3:58:00 PM

you're on a roll eloi.. galeng!.. cheers to you for a well-deserved win!.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 5:08:00 PM

Thank you Nette..:) hugs too..:) yours too so lovely..:)

David Mohn

Date: 7/12/2014 8:39:00 AM

Congratulations on this enchanting stroll on a very imaginative path

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 5:06:00 PM

Thank you David..:) kudos too!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/12/2014 4:24:00 AM

Very beautiful write Olive ! Deserved great win,, huge congrats dear!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 5:05:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Upma for your beautiful comment..:)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/11/2014 6:37:00 PM

Olive, my friend, a beautiful take and lovely win on the forest path. Mohan

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 5:05:00 PM

Thank you Mohan my friend and yours too..:) I saw it so nice..:) love the take you have in the contest!

Roy Jerden

Date: 7/11/2014 2:45:00 PM

Well done, Olive. Like Cyndi, I find your word pairings intriguing, and quite unconventional. Congratulations!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/11/2014 3:13:00 PM

Thank you ROy. :) God bless and congratulations as well... :)

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 7/11/2014 2:29:00 PM

Hello Sweet Olive... I will have to spend more time reading your poem, again. You see, your voice sounded so like Linda Marie's that it sent me into a sad-nostalgic tailspin. There is a confidence in your poem, a maturity that she, too, possessed. She decorated her poetry with adjectives, unabashed and thumbing her nose at the status quo. She also was very careful with modifiers/pronouns. So somehow she combines ornate with simplicity-- I see a similar quality to your work. Congratulations. GOOD

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/11/2014 3:06:00 PM

im all humbled Cyndi and thank you.. :) i have lots of fun learning and well writing.. :)

Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 7/11/2014 2:33:00 PM

PS-- I wanted to clarify that your voice is all your own. I see that your word pairings are both original and delightful, and the figurative language? Not like our Sweetheart's. I miss our friend. Keep writing! Awesome!!!!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/11/2014 1:23:00 PM

Congratulations Olive_eloi :))) Ice-cream for you! I too wonder what Cyndi's reaction was! // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/11/2014 3:05:00 PM

fauna and flora and well God's presence in one and well, evil too remember Genesis... :) that's my idea on this poem.. :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/11/2014 3:04:00 PM

Paul up above :O and on Craig's blog.. :O so humbled.. :O as I didn't mean too. :) as the inspiration of this write comes from the thought that all things around us have little voices of which sometimes few few are minding them.. :) and I inspired to put this in this theme as the forest is of life..