Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

Goethe's Path: Forest a Choral Life

Along aisle of twigs, moist brown leaves and stones,

Clustered bellflowers guard as I ramble
Whispered chord echoes from choir of bushes groans, 

The rustles, a beckoning preamble


Shady sky-high trees of wrinkled clothed moss

Healthily exhaling thy cool fresh air. 
Tongue satiates divine wood spring, I doss.

Finch trembles chanting rosary keys  pray'rs.


Built organs from pines tunes mellow reeds

Gentle soothing blows invites butterflies
There flights harmonious lambada speed

Squirrels one fugue pitch share a lullaby


Golden rays peeps through gnarled branches of trees,

Casting apes acrobatic seesaw dance.  
Glorious forest homes choral life thee

Who will dare and miss such enthralling chance?

(c) Olive ELoisa
1:03am
June 23, 2014
placed 4th.. :) to God be the glory.. :)

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James Fraser December 9, 2014 at 1:17 PM This is surely a path I'd love to walk, especially with someone special. Such memories it would give, James :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 10, 2014 at 6:10 AM thanks much James.i sure love this poem too

Gary Bateman October 24, 2014 at 3:34 PM Very Great poem and read here Olive!! Cheers, Gary Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 27, 2014 at 6:41 AM thanks m1uch gary.. :) GBU

Casarah Nance July 13, 2014 at 11:59 AM Whoohoo, glad to see you on the winners list girl!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 27, 2014 at 6:40 AM thanks much Cassie :)

Nette Onclaud July 12, 2014 at 3:58 PM you're on a roll eloi.. galeng!.. cheers to you for a well-deserved win!.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 5:08 PM Thank you Nette..:) hugs too..:) yours too so lovely..:)

David Mohn July 12, 2014 at 8:39 AM Congratulations on this enchanting stroll on a very imaginative path Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 5:06 PM Thank you David..:) kudos too!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 12, 2014 at 4:24 AM Very beautiful write Olive ! Deserved great win,, huge congrats dear! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 5:05 PM Thank you Dr. Upma for your beautiful comment..:)

Mohan Chutani July 11, 2014 at 6:37 PM Olive, my friend, a beautiful take and lovely win on the forest path. Mohan Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 5:05 PM Thank you Mohan my friend and yours too..:) I saw it so nice..:) love the take you have in the contest!

Roy Jerden July 11, 2014 at 2:45 PM Well done, Olive. Like Cyndi, I find your word pairings intriguing, and quite unconventional. Congratulations! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 11, 2014 at 3:13 PM Thank you ROy. :) God bless and congratulations as well... :)

Cyndi Macmillan July 11, 2014 at 2:29 PM Hello Sweet Olive... I will have to spend more time reading your poem, again. You see, your voice sounded so like Linda Marie's that it sent me into a sad-nostalgic tailspin. There is a confidence in your poem, a maturity that she, too, possessed. She decorated her poetry with adjectives, unabashed and thumbing her nose at the status quo. She also was very careful with modifiers/pronouns. So somehow she combines ornate with simplicity-- I see a similar quality to your work. Congratulations. GOOD Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 11, 2014 at 3:06 PM im all humbled Cyndi and thank you.. :) i have lots of fun learning and well writing.. :) Cyndi Macmillan July 11, 2014 at 2:33 PM PS-- I wanted to clarify that your voice is all your own. I see that your word pairings are both original and delightful, and the figurative language? Not like our Sweetheart's. I miss our friend. Keep writing! Awesome!!!!

Paul Callus July 11, 2014 at 1:23 PM Congratulations Olive_eloi :))) Ice-cream for you! I too wonder what Cyndi's reaction was! // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 11, 2014 at 3:05 PM fauna and flora and well God's presence in one and well, evil too remember Genesis... :) that's my idea on this poem.. :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 11, 2014 at 3:04 PM Paul up above :O and on Craig's blog.. :O so humbled.. :O as I didn't mean too. :) as the inspiration of this write comes from the thought that all things around us have little voices of which sometimes few few are minding them.. :) and I inspired to put this in this theme as the forest is of life..

Faye Gibson July 11, 2014 at 1:00 PM Lovely, Olive. I always enjoy your writings. Congratulations. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 11, 2014 at 3:01 PM Thanks you Faye :) it's so pleasurable to write.. :) fun and learning :)

Anne-Lise Andresen July 11, 2014 at 12:59 PM - Beautiful written !! - Congratulations on your winning poem, Olive !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 11, 2014 at 3:00 PM Thank you Anee Lise.. :) I appreciate it.. :) GOd bless you and hugs.. :)

Arlene Smith July 11, 2014 at 10:36 AM Thank you for taking me through your beautiful forest dear Olive.. Congrats on a great win!.. Hugs.. Arlene Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 11, 2014 at 12:10 PM Your welcome Arlene, my friend:) congrats as well..:)

Debbie Guzzi July 11, 2014 at 10:32 AM You made it sound so alive Olive. Congrad's on your Win Light & Love Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 11, 2014 at 12:10 PM Thanks for the encouragement Debbie..:) God bless you..:)

Elaine George June 26, 2014 at 12:26 PM Simply beautiful, Olive. bfn Elaine Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 30, 2014 at 12:47 PM Thank you so much Elaine..:) GBU

Casarah Nance June 23, 2014 at 1:47 PM What a enthralling dance. I enjoyed your trip through the forest girl. :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 23, 2014 at 4:23 PM :) weee.. :) thanks Casarah.. :)

Paul Callus June 23, 2014 at 9:27 AM NO, I would not want to miss such enthralling imagery where you appeal directly to the senses. Well expressed. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 23, 2014 at 10:36 AM As I am too Paul..:) I remember my trips to some forest..:) one with nature..:)