John Freeman Poet Limerick

"god's Trinity On Limerick"

A Precept Limerick

Precept versus concepts in one’s writing,
Alone, concepts remain__  problems fighting!
  Thus these are the two levels,
  Concepts have not love’s bevel.
Precept is above the problems gliding.

Thus Love’s precept of one’s own opinion, 
Promotes one from being chief’s Indian.
  Problems are below,
  Where strives of wind blow.
Precept answers to Love, concepts break wind.

Concept’s judgments of precept, are inept, 
For natural mind by precept is kept.
  By mind’s vice of verse, 
`Tis no Love disperse.
One’s inspiration is kept of precept! 

 8-29-10

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 2, 2010 at 8:40 PM Cannot find the one u referred to in your Soup Mail Moses.. did u not write it yet.. if u did the title is missing from one of the poems on your list luv..perhaps that is it.. has to have the same title for all the entries..luv..

Sara Kendrick September 1, 2010 at 4:18 PM Interesting one in these Limericks..Oh! what man can conceive while relying on the Holy Spirit to lead him..Oh! what evil man can conceive when relying on the devil or just carnality of the human mind...Good job..Sara

Harry Horsman September 1, 2010 at 2:13 AM excellent message here John, enjoyed these limericks. Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 31, 2010 at 4:53 PM Wow Moses even in Limerick the message is clear and important.. enjoyed my friend.. my wedding photos are now posted on my blog .. hope u enjoy the view..only ten allowed now by the website..so all the scenes of Italy and the villas and shoppes will be on next month luv.. enjoy..

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2010 at 8:13 AM Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration John. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta August 29, 2010 at 7:28 PM A very nice message you have conveyed here, John. enjoyed it.

John Freeman August 29, 2010 at 7:06 PM I am delighted to see that most people are getting this precept poem's message!!!!!!!!!!!!! Smoo____ Cheese, Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse August 29, 2010 at 5:08 PM Great write! Thanks for your support and help! Enjoyed reading your work!

Constance La France August 29, 2010 at 4:56 PM This poem must be read several times and then all is clear and beautiful, I think I am precep(ha ha) because I am always gliding~~

Carolyn Devonshire August 29, 2010 at 12:53 PM Outstanding trilogy, John. You always write from your heart, the source of love. As you say so cleverly, "concepts break wind." That line made me laugh, but there is some serious wisdom to consider here, my friend. Great work! Love, Carolyn