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God's Redemption

We saw in the garden the seed Planted by man’s first evil deed God sent his own son To be the right one To absorb sin so man be freed © Jun 21 2010 for John’s “Human foible” contest

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Date: 6/25/2010 8:37:00 PM
Congratulations, Charles. this one had great meter too.
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Date: 6/25/2010 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2010 5:27:00 AM
Congrats, Charles. Great write. You and yours have a great weekend. Rgds, Ralph
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Date: 6/25/2010 3:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/24/2010 11:25:00 PM
Great win Charles. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 6/24/2010 10:41:00 PM
I like your use of the word absorb sin. Like a sponge, Smile! That is exactly what happened. Congratulations, Charles on a fine presentation with your worthy poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/21/2010 2:49:00 AM
That "first evil deed" still follows us today, Charles. Beautifully written with a welcome spiritual quality that John will love. Best wishes, Carolyn
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