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God's only son

Charred in solace of your embrace
reminiscences engrossed as imprint
harboured in placards of your grace

A birth, a thousand with no squint
in winter's pure pour of snow
reminiscences engrossed as imprint

Giggling with nights glow
in waxes and treelights
in winter's pure pour of snow

One who ignites in delights
grining in fire and refuge
in waxes and treelights

A festivity of tunes and rouge
that twirls in vitality
grining in fire and refuge

Presents reciprocated in sib purity
charred in solace of your embrace
that twirls in vitality
harboured in placards of your grace

Copyright © Tonye George | Year Posted 2023

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Sam Scott Date: 4/8/2024 8:41:00 PM Late to the party.. but this oozes Christmas and I love the "A festivity of tunes and rouge that twirls in vitality.." lines. Look forward to more :) Sam Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 4/11/2024 9:49:00 AM Hey Sam. There's always a cup for you whenever you visit. The music is always on. Thank you for visiting.

Valsa George Date: 12/31/2023 7:45:00 AM Very ingeniously done. Great rhyming too. For me terzanelle is a difficult form. But you have handled it in a unique way. A great entry for the contest. All the best dear Tonye ! Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 12/31/2023 5:07:00 PM Thank you Valsa. Happy new year to you

Stephan McBride Date: 12/30/2023 8:09:00 AM Love it, so very well put together, beautiful gift you have in writing , One who ignites in delights , love it, : ) for He brought the spirit of fire to place within us to consume and purify us unto a family unto the Living God Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 12/31/2023 5:13:00 PM Thank you Stephan, a happy new year to you.

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/29/2023 1:42:00 PM Without His grace we would be nothing. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 12/31/2023 5:12:00 PM Indeed we are nothing without his grace, I hope your new year is filled with favour and happiness.

Bill Baker Date: 12/22/2023 9:40:00 PM A challenging form to share your thoughts through, Tonye, but you did well, and this is a good entry for the contest. Good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 12/31/2023 5:11:00 PM Thank you friend, a happy new and marvelous year to you and your family Bill.

Hiya Sharma Date: 12/18/2023 2:53:00 AM Oh wow, this is quite an intriguing form which I've been thinking to try too, but you've actually nailed it! Quite a profound take for the contest and that too, you've carved this so beautifully.. An aura of merry can be felt here yet with a sense of evocative depth.. Wonderfully done! :) Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 12/18/2023 8:39:00 AM Thank you for your support and great insight Hiya, you should try it, Merry Christmas.

Silent One Date: 12/17/2023 10:53:00 AM You did this form so well and this is a very different entry I have seen for the contest.. You have expressed it really well with great rhymes.. Login to Reply Tonye George Date: 12/17/2023 12:38:00 PM Yay! Thank you silent one. Happy Sunday.

Tom Woody Date: 12/17/2023 9:54:00 AM You're mega talented Tonye. While I don't associate the tradition of Xmas with the birth of the Christ as many do, I nevertheless embrace the import of his coming into the world Login to Reply Tom Woody Date: 12/17/2023 10:19:00 AM Yes'm Tonye George Date: 12/17/2023 10:06:00 AM Yes I remember you said that in one piece I read. The most significant thing is truly his impact and how it affects you and how you live with it and by it. You good. Thank you for your support woody.