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God's Loving Eyes

in no particular order as consideration for fodder  it is the wandering clouds  hover above the crowds it is the mountain snow reflecting the suns flow the giant oaks fashionably seductive their virile presence always productive the sunrise dispersing warm streams of light  decorating the morning rush followed by the sunset...its downward flight fades the bright to an evening hush it is the smokey make-up worn by model nights with glowing gems against their pitch black sights it is the forest dwellers those who steal our hearts  the giant creatures that speeds our beating parts the symphony of the rainforests with its hidden notes the beaches with its bleached sands its spoken quotes everywhere you look...prized his loving eyes eccentricsized  gathered to accentuate his caring glare nothing compares to God's eyes...their flare.
Oct 6 2014 Contest: Eccsentrisize my Eyes Sponsor: Myster Rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 10/20/2014 1:31:00 PM
Beautiful images and a great inspiring poem, Maurice. A sav for me. And I see by the other comments that you have entered this in a contest, I want to add my "good luck wishes" to all the others you have received
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/9/2014 9:37:00 PM
You are so kind Darlene.
Date: 10/6/2014 6:22:00 PM
YOu really thought outside the box on this one, my friend. I would rate this very high in the contest! So creative and original!! Gotta run, but look forward to new poems from you very soon!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/9/2014 9:36:00 PM
I don't write so good!
Date: 10/6/2014 4:42:00 PM
Loved it Maurice...I haven't attempted this....Seren
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/9/2014 9:35:00 PM
I wish I hadn't. Nothing, Zero, Nada Zilch. that is what I placed.
Date: 10/6/2014 3:33:00 PM
The shape captivating, the images incomparably beautiful, the expressions magnificent! Good luck on the contest my friend, Maurice!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/9/2014 9:34:00 PM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 10/6/2014 7:56:00 AM
wonderful rhyme and a totally unique take on the theme. Good luck in the contest :-) hugs Jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/6/2014 8:50:00 AM
This was very last minute.
Date: 10/6/2014 7:23:00 AM
ahhh, this is unique, I was wondering how you were going to tie it into the theme and you wrapped it up in a nice bow and delivered it home, great job, very beautiful descriptions. Hugs.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/6/2014 8:49:00 AM
This was very last minute when I saw it was almost full.
Date: 10/6/2014 4:54:00 AM
I thought this poem was really good!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/6/2014 8:48:00 AM
Thank You.
Date: 10/6/2014 3:55:00 AM
Well done my friend...good luck...cheers
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/6/2014 8:47:00 AM
I just wanted to squeeze in before the contest ended.
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