God's Kind of Poetry

An eagle finds the highest mountain to build its nest
And lays the first layer of nest with sharp objects
Such as thorns and stones for the unborn with zest
And next, covering that layer with soft targets,
Such as wood, feathers and the animal fur.
So as the baby birds are hatched, gets protection.
As they grew a bit, the mother eagle takes 
The nest materials and mixes them up.
The jumbled mass is now a mix of sharp and soft
And sometimes sharp edges may cut babies’ skin.
And next, the mother stops putting food 
From her mouth to the mouths of the babies.
Making their comfortable world into painful one.
The discomfort becomes so great for the babies
They begin to fly away to get out of the nest.

This analogy of God explains the value of pains.
We don’t seek god when happy and comfortable
We turn to him only in times of troubles.
God does whatever it takes help eagles fly
It’s a wake-up call to teach every one of us
Not too much indulge in physical comforts.
God removes the soft coverings to remind us
That this life is painful and full of sufferings
And its solution is to soar in spiritual realms.

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September 25, 2014
Form: Free Verse
Dr. Ram Mehta
First Place Win
Contest: God's kind of poetry by BriAN Johnston

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/12/2021 6:36:00 AM
I must agree it's a mix of bliss and pain through Life Dear Dr, and we often rail at this, without Looking to the deeper lesson involved I wish you all the best.'
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Date: 10/27/2014 7:57:00 AM
Oh! I'm sorry Dr. Ram I did a mistake on your name here. You wrote like Paul in the Bible. Very awesome!
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Date: 10/27/2014 7:50:00 AM
Oh! What an inspiring, spiritual poem. You deserve to win this awesome contest, Paul. Congrats! God bless you!
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Date: 10/22/2014 7:02:00 PM
Great poem and also a great explanation of the meaning behind the poem. I believe if more people, including myself too would slow down to acknowledge and try and understand the lessons being taught to us through our suffering a lot of our suffering would be unrepeated. Great Poem TDD
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Date: 10/20/2014 10:33:00 PM
This is extremely awesome! Congratulations on your well-deserved top win my dear friend Dr. Ram! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 10/18/2014 2:35:00 PM
Your descriptions are wonderful, congrats on a first place win!
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Date: 10/17/2014 10:55:00 PM
An amazing write Dr. Ram, a true pic painted especially in the second stanza ! congrats on ur yet another first place win!
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Date: 10/17/2014 12:41:00 PM
Congratz on ur win
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Date: 10/17/2014 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on you amazing poem. Wonderful observations and wisdom imparted. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 10/17/2014 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful write Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
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Date: 10/17/2014 12:10:00 AM
Part 1: As I am buffeted by the up and down drafts in the lofty halls of poetry on both PH and PS, I am so heartened by your art here that it scarcely matters to me if it is true or not. If it is not true, then it should be, in the same sense that if God does not in fact exist, still, He/She should exist, for there is injustice that needs to be righted, and so many that need help recognizing the fact that God does love them and that He/She is always there for them.
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Date: 10/17/2014 12:12:00 AM
It is true that many seem to fall by the wayside of life, and yet my heart rejoices in the thought that what does not kill me, actually serves to make me stronger if I will simply be open to the gift. There are so many races we can run that make a difference in this world. A truely lovely poem and a great gift to us all. Your poem simply left me soaring in places I never dreamed of visiting even! Thank you!
Date: 10/16/2014 10:45:00 PM
Dear Dr. Ram, Your poem is filled with wisdom. Indeed, many people only pray when they need comfort or assistance. A nun once told me God most appreciates prayers of thanks. I try to remember this each day. Congratulations on a first place win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/16/2014 10:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta. It was nice to read this again.
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Date: 10/16/2014 9:13:00 PM
Beautiful write and I enjoyed it tremendously. So true. Congratulations and God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 10/16/2014 7:17:00 PM
Wonderful choice for a 1st place win Ram. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 10/16/2014 6:05:00 PM
Dr. Ram, heartfelt congratulations to you for your first place win in this contest! I loved it when it was poem of the day, and I knew it was a winner! Sandra
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Date: 10/16/2014 4:20:00 PM
Bah. Bohut sundor...Very nice...I enjoyed it...Best wishes from my heart...
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Date: 10/16/2014 12:38:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FIRST PLACE WIN WITH GOD'S KIND OF POETRY.
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Date: 10/16/2014 10:15:00 AM
A wonderful poem Dr. Mehta. I would have been totally surprised had it not won first place. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/16/2014 7:57:00 AM
It is nice to see this super one on the winning list,congrats Sir.
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Date: 10/16/2014 4:15:00 AM
lovely to read this again Dr Mehta:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/16/2014 1:06:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine example winning top honors in the contest Dr. Ram!
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Date: 10/16/2014 12:55:00 AM
I see I have good taste, it appears the Judge liked it as well. Congratulations on your top placement.
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Date: 10/14/2014 5:12:00 PM
I love the analogy you give us as the Eagle represents God and We His baby birds, He the protector and giver, we take shelter in His wings of soft coverings. beautifully written!
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Date: 10/13/2014 7:45:00 AM
Wow fantastic and right on the money. Love this. And if you give me your permission I will post it on my facebook acredited to you. or you can look me up and friend me and post it on my line. Thank you for such an honest poem
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