Gods Beautiful Loan

Your a beautiful soul more precious then any gold.

Your a diamond in the rough
And heaven's missing angel 

Its as if the Almighty God has given me his most beautiful  as a loan and so I  claim you as my own..




Pixie poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 2, 2016 at 8:48 AM
with the most Beautiful interest paid my Soul will be Saved because of the Love you gave which you know I crave like the ocean needs waves so in your heart, I will bathe....you have a new fan threase....;)
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February 1, 2016 at 4:32 PM
great metaphor. Threase, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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February 1, 2016 at 2:12 PM
Hi Pixie Poet,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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