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God's Amusement Park

Timeless, at once, a memory of long ago Born from Heaven, to Earth, a new life to grow First from clay, then ocean spray And wrapped in God’s own DNA Miracle of life, perfect pure so innocent and new Divine dominion, planet Earth, in shades of Reds, greens but mostly sky blue Yet far beyond colors and shades in God’s Amusement Park Lies a network of tones and sounds and These lyrics of life change after dark Heaven and Earth and life so symphony pure Conducted by God’s hand divinely sure Yet many believe an exploding star Is why we are How Bazaar God made us who we are, promised his Son he would send So when you watch me rise up to Heaven Your exploding star is how it will end
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/2/2014 9:51:00 AM
LOL, Back here to thank you for the reply...Linda
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Warner Baxter
Date: 9/6/2014 6:22:00 PM
;)
Date: 8/29/2014 10:15:00 AM
:) :) Forever thanks
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Warner Baxter
Date: 8/29/2014 10:39:00 AM
My pleasure
Date: 8/24/2014 11:49:00 AM
Warner:) Thank you for the nice reply on my comment <3 LINDA
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Warner Baxter
Date: 8/27/2014 10:29:00 AM
indeed :):):)
Date: 8/6/2014 10:19:00 PM
WARNER,, A wonderful, poem to read. Congrats, on your win.... LINDA
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Date: 8/8/2014 10:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda, I am glad you enjoyed it
Date: 8/1/2014 7:49:00 AM
Way to go congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/1/2014 9:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara
Date: 8/1/2014 7:41:00 AM
Big congrats on a fine win....
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Warner Baxter
Date: 8/1/2014 9:28:00 PM
Thank you Robert
Date: 8/1/2014 2:05:00 AM
Congratulations Warner xx
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Warner Baxter
Date: 8/1/2014 9:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Mandy
Date: 7/31/2014 10:46:00 AM
Wonderful expression and concept. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/31/2014 11:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Joyce
Date: 7/31/2014 9:11:00 AM
Great amazing write Warner ! Congrats on ur very deserved top place win!
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/31/2014 10:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Sharma. your comments and opinions are most welcome
Date: 7/31/2014 7:19:00 AM
What a ride1 congrats on your top win!
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Date: 7/31/2014 8:36:00 AM
Thank you Casarah
Date: 7/31/2014 5:58:00 AM
I love this metaphor, from Amusement Park to nova. Congrats, Warner !
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/31/2014 6:09:00 AM
Thank you so much Keith, I am glad you liked it
Date: 7/31/2014 2:38:00 AM
Love your third stanza..:) wow sow wonderful write.. Amusement park portrays lots of view.. Arouses lots of eMotions and feeling from a person who tries to go there..:)
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/31/2014 2:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Olive, I am glad you liked it
Date: 7/31/2014 1:31:00 AM
"My God is awesome God." Beautiful Warren... Congratulations on you win in Riddle's God Contest. Verlena
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Warner Baxter
Date: 7/31/2014 1:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Verlena, God bless and it's Warner ;)

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