God's Amusement Park

Timeless, at once, a memory of long ago Born from Heaven, to Earth, a new life to grow First from clay, then ocean spray And wrapped in God’s own DNA Miracle of life, perfect pure so innocent and new Divine dominion, planet Earth, in shades of Reds, greens but mostly sky blue Yet far beyond colors and shades in God’s Amusement Park Lies a network of tones and sounds and These lyrics of life change after dark Heaven and Earth and life so symphony pure Conducted by God’s hand divinely sure Yet many believe an exploding star Is why we are How Bazaar God made us who we are, promised his Son he would send So when you watch me rise up to Heaven Your exploding star is how it will end
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 9:51 AM
LOL, Back here to thank you for the reply...Linda
Baxter Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 6:22 PM
;)
A   Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 10:15 AM
:) :) Forever thanks
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August 29, 2014 at 10:39 AM
My pleasure
A   Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 11:49 AM
Warner:) Thank you for the nice reply on my comment <3 LINDA
Baxter Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 10:29 AM
indeed :):):)
A   Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 10:19 PM
WARNER,, A wonderful, poem to read. Congrats, on your win.... LINDA
Baxter Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 10:17 PM
Thank you so much Linda, I am glad you enjoyed it
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 7:49 AM
Way to go congrats on your winning work..Sara
Baxter Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 9:27 PM
Thank you so much Sara
Lindley Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Big congrats on a fine win....
Baxter Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 9:28 PM
Thank you Robert
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 2:05 AM
Congratulations Warner xx
Baxter Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 9:29 PM
Thank you so much Mandy
Johnson Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 10:46 AM
Wonderful expression and concept. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Baxter Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Thank you so much Joyce
A. Sharma Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 9:11 AM
Great amazing write Warner ! Congrats on ur very deserved top place win!
Baxter Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 10:02 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Sharma. your comments and opinions are most welcome
Nance Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 7:19 AM
What a ride1 congrats on your top win!
Baxter Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Thank you Casarah
Merritt Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 5:58 AM
I love this metaphor, from Amusement Park to nova. Congrats, Warner !
Baxter Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 6:09 AM
Thank you so much Keith, I am glad you liked it
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 2:38 AM
Love your third stanza..:) wow sow wonderful write.. Amusement park portrays lots of view.. Arouses lots of eMotions and feeling from a person who tries to go there..:)
Baxter Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 2:51 AM
Thank you so much Olive, I am glad you liked it
Walker  Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 1:31 AM
"My God is awesome God." Beautiful Warren... Congratulations on you win in Riddle's God Contest. Verlena
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July 31, 2014 at 1:42 AM
Thank you so much Verlena, God bless and it's Warner ;)
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