Godiva Chocolates

Godiva Chocolates tempt Dieters beware Melt-in-your-mouth milky charm Evokes a craving My control lapses I give in Feast!
*Soup's Syllable counter says "chocolate" is three syllables.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Davis Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 9:43 PM
Carolyn Yes, give into those chocolate cravings. Nothing wrong with that. LOL Thank you for the sweet comment on my Fun Secret poem
Ball Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 6:48 AM
woman and chocolate, amazing, love the poem go to soup mail, think I figured it out, and my prayers ave been with you everyday, every night and all day, so don't worry today is Friday and getting ready to go on this radio program Sunday morning please tell me what you want me to plug for you and right now I'm looking for a sponsor, I need a little financial help because my wife just had her operation and really am looking for a Christian person to help me in my mission, the Lord will helpG.bless
Austin Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 5:29 AM
My weakness is chocolate too, especially MILK chocolate. My wife likes dark chocolate. I can enjoy it, but, like, I could buy one of those giant Hershey bars and machine gun it down in 30 seconds. A mouthwatering masterpiece, dear Carolyn. Love, daver
Campi Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 3:26 AM
Yes !! Godiva Chocolates are the best. I a chocolate addict. I love it as did my mom. She could get a large bag of M&Ms in one setting while watching TV and not gain an ounce. Anyway , I liked your poem, it started my sweet tooth off. Oh yes, speaking about my dog Dollar he is indeed spoiled as are the others, but perhaps a little bit more.
Osita Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 11:33 AM
This is very nice!
Maverick Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Carolyn when you are (up to it) i have sent you soup mail.!
Loving Iii Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 1:28 PM
it is three syllables. john
Horne Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Thanks, Carolyn : ) It wasn't about the monk, though - DF is a very famous Devon legend LOL
Foulk Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 2:25 PM
Carolyn this is a yummy piece you wrote and speaking of piece I will have one. very creative enjoyed.
Maverick Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 1:54 PM
Well it sure looks like a mouthful from here Carolyn! it can't hurt to indulge once in while anyway, (so enjoyed the read) all my best to you allways!
Poet Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 9:30 AM
Got to taste it Carolyn!Congrats on your win.-kash
Horsman Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 6:51 AM
Don't believe it, choc is good for you Carolyn(in moderation of course) yes 3 syllables, my yorkshire accent as it at 2. the Godiva bit in your title as got me, wasn't she the naked one in coventry, on horse back? Oh by the way, your poem is awesome. love Harry
Knop Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 5:44 AM
My congrats too, Carolyn! Yes. cho-co-late! 3 syllables!!! Your chocolate poem melts in my mouth! My favourites are Swiss Chocolates and Belgium chocolate truffles!!! Both are mouth-watering!.. Enjoyed the read!...Love, Gert
Brown Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 5:12 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in John Heck's contest "Eat Me Epulaeryu". Love, Carol
Barrow Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 5:56 PM
tasty work of art
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 3:01 PM
Now I am going thru the list and have come upon yours that it WAS in the contest. Congrats on the HM!
Durbin Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 2:52 PM
Who can say no, Carolyn?
Wilson Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 1:40 PM
What a very yummy poem you have written..should I give in to my dieter's craving for chocolate now?! love,Deb
Mehta Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 1:29 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 1:23 PM
YUMMMMM. I think syllable counters are silly, Carolyn. Two or three it does not matter. There is the way we speak and then sometimes it does not measure up to what the dictionary says. But I like the dictionaries that give both ways as correct! was this in the contest of John's? I have an epulaeryu to post one of these days! Yours was very delicious!
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April 10, 2011 at 12:37 PM
These are my wifes favs!!!! now I must go out before she comes home from work today and buy her some... sweet write form a sweet lady and poet...love Michael
Locksley Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 12:19 PM
I'm addicted to chocolate and especially enjoy the Godiva brand. I think dieters deserve to have a treat now and then. Congratulations! Best to you, Diane
Neels Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 12:01 PM
Hey there Carolyn, how are you doing? Congratulations on your win with this yummy write.. hmmm now you have my mouth watering hehe.. love Wilma
Horne Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 11:54 AM
I hope you enjoyed it, with 2 or 3 syllables LOL. Lovely poem - and I see it was a winner - many congrats : )
George   Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 11:43 AM
lol!! They cast a spell on me too. I just can't say no to them. Mouth-watering Epulaeryu, Carolyn. Many congrats on your win. Lainie
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