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Godiva Chocolates

Godiva Chocolates tempt Dieters beware Melt-in-your-mouth milky charm Evokes a craving My control lapses I give in Feast! *Soup's Syllable counter says "chocolate" is three syllables.

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Robin Davis

Date: 7/27/2014 9:43:00 PM

Carolyn Yes, give into those chocolate cravings. Nothing wrong with that. LOL Thank you for the sweet comment on my Fun Secret poem

Robert Ball

Date: 5/20/2011 6:48:00 AM

woman and chocolate, amazing, love the poem go to soup mail, think I figured it out, and my prayers ave been with you everyday, every night and all day, so don't worry today is Friday and getting ready to go on this radio program Sunday morning please tell me what you want me to plug for you and right now I'm looking for a sponsor, I need a little financial help because my wife just had her operation and really am looking for a Christian person to help me in my mission, the Lord will helpG.bless

Daver Austin

Date: 4/19/2011 5:29:00 AM

My weakness is chocolate too, especially MILK chocolate. My wife likes dark chocolate. I can enjoy it, but, like, I could buy one of those giant Hershey bars and machine gun it down in 30 seconds. A mouthwatering masterpiece, dear Carolyn. Love, daver

Jancarl Campi

Date: 4/17/2011 3:26:00 AM

Yes !! Godiva Chocolates are the best. I a chocolate addict. I love it as did my mom. She could get a large bag of M&Ms in one setting while watching TV and not gain an ounce. Anyway , I liked your poem, it started my sweet tooth off. Oh yes, speaking about my dog Dollar he is indeed spoiled as are the others, but perhaps a little bit more.

Joseph Osita

Date: 4/16/2011 11:33:00 AM

This is very nice!

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/12/2011 2:26:00 PM

Carolyn when you are (up to it) i have sent you soup mail.!

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/12/2011 1:28:00 PM

it is three syllables. john

Jack Horne

Date: 4/12/2011 11:55:00 AM

Thanks, Carolyn : ) It wasn't about the monk, though - DF is a very famous Devon legend LOL

James Foulk

Date: 4/11/2011 2:25:00 PM

Carolyn this is a yummy piece you wrote and speaking of piece I will have one. very creative enjoyed.

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/11/2011 1:54:00 PM

Well it sure looks like a mouthful from here Carolyn! it can't hurt to indulge once in while anyway, (so enjoyed the read) all my best to you allways!

Kash Poet

Date: 4/11/2011 9:30:00 AM

Got to taste it Carolyn!Congrats on your win.-kash

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/11/2011 6:51:00 AM

Don't believe it, choc is good for you Carolyn(in moderation of course) yes 3 syllables, my yorkshire accent as it at 2. the Godiva bit in your title as got me, wasn't she the naked one in coventry, on horse back? Oh by the way, your poem is awesome. love Harry

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/11/2011 5:44:00 AM

My congrats too, Carolyn! Yes. cho-co-late! 3 syllables!!! Your chocolate poem melts in my mouth! My favourites are Swiss Chocolates and Belgium chocolate truffles!!! Both are mouth-watering!.. Enjoyed the read!...Love, Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/11/2011 5:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Carolyn in John Heck's contest "Eat Me Epulaeryu". Love, Carol

Anthony Barrow

Date: 4/10/2011 5:56:00 PM

tasty work of art

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2011 3:01:00 PM

Now I am going thru the list and have come upon yours that it WAS in the contest. Congrats on the HM!

Cherie Durbin

Date: 4/10/2011 2:52:00 PM

Who can say no, Carolyn?

Deb Wilson

Date: 4/10/2011 1:40:00 PM

What a very yummy poem you have written..should I give in to my dieter's craving for chocolate now?! love,Deb

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/10/2011 1:29:00 PM

Congratulations on the HM win in the contest, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2011 1:23:00 PM

YUMMMMM. I think syllable counters are silly, Carolyn. Two or three it does not matter. There is the way we speak and then sometimes it does not measure up to what the dictionary says. But I like the dictionaries that give both ways as correct! was this in the contest of John's? I have an epulaeryu to post one of these days! Yours was very delicious!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/10/2011 12:37:00 PM

These are my wifes favs!!!! now I must go out before she comes home from work today and buy her some... sweet write form a sweet lady and poet...love Michael

Diane Locksley

Date: 4/10/2011 12:19:00 PM

I'm addicted to chocolate and especially enjoy the Godiva brand. I think dieters deserve to have a treat now and then. Congratulations! Best to you, Diane

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/10/2011 12:01:00 PM

Hey there Carolyn, how are you doing? Congratulations on your win with this yummy write.. hmmm now you have my mouth watering hehe.. love Wilma

Jack Horne

Date: 4/10/2011 11:54:00 AM

I hope you enjoyed it, with 2 or 3 syllables LOL. Lovely poem - and I see it was a winner - many congrats : )

Elaine George

Date: 4/10/2011 11:43:00 AM

lol!! They cast a spell on me too. I just can't say no to them. Mouth-watering Epulaeryu, Carolyn. Many congrats on your win. Lainie