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Collage of Autumn gown by Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/26/2021 4:18:00 PM : Published by Old Mounain Press in
“Holiday Cheer” Poetry and Prose Anthology. 2021

STRAND NO 1042
Contest Judged: 12/29/2021 5:40:00 AM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand |
First Place 2022:
Your Favourite Poem from 2021 Premier Contest
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Placed 3rd

Gliding down amber, leaf strewn lanes Her wild hair flowing in golden tones Goddess of Autumn awakens again To soothe the sound of Winter’s pain She lingers in woodsmoke of promises made Where trees are shedding their Summer shade She paints their green with a crimson tinge Beside oaks that stand all acorn-ringed Her voice is whispering in every glade Her frosty eyes and spicy smile Her ragged, leaf brown rustling gown Her brisk, bright essence floating down

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Timothy Ray

Date: 5/29/2023 10:16:00 PM

Autumn is certainly all her own....help in the beauty as gently heralds the splendor in the coming change and so enamoring....one never looks away, clinging to each moment in a total mesmerizing state of existence so lovely captured here in each line....

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/20/2022 10:54:00 AM

SuZ, congratulations on your win. Every line speaks of autumn wonders in imagery as vivid as autumn colors and bold metaphoric images. Delightful to read as autumn approaches. High fives and hats off for your publication! Blessings.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/20/2022 4:55:00 PM

Thanks so much for reading and leaving a lovely comment for me. SuZ

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/20/2022 7:22:00 AM

Vivid illustration of the autumn. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/19/2022 9:31:00 AM

Back with "Congratulations" on your New win. A wonderful/creative~~write/picture. I "Love" the write/dress/picture. Have you thought about making things like this for some of your poems??? Have a blessed day writing away.................

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/19/2022 5:01:00 PM

Hi Paula: Thanks for your sweet comment. I did make this dress from paper and ribbons. Do you mean have I thought about making more collages for my other poems?

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/19/2022 6:24:00 AM

Suzanne, you have made magnificent use of personification in this lovely poem. CONGRATS on your well deserved win. Janice

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/19/2022 5:05:00 PM

Thanks so much, Janice.

Julia Ward

Date: 7/19/2022 3:14:00 AM

So pretty! Well done for its win in the "Your Favourite Poem from 2021", judged by me today.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/19/2022 5:05:00 PM

Thanks Julia: I appreciate the placement and your kind comment. Best, SuZ

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/29/2021 2:06:00 PM

I am so happy to see this lovely poem on the winners list SuZ. It is a favorite of mine. If you capture some autumn colors on camera please send me a copy or two email. I miss enjoying those autumn colors. Congratulations on your first placement. Have a blessed new year. xxoo

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/19/2022 5:10:00 PM

Thanks Connie: I will definitely send some Autumn pics from my upstairs computer. Glad to do that. Hugs, SuZ

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/29/2021 6:23:00 AM

"Her wild hair flowing in golden tones" - What a narration! Whole poem is beautiful. Congratulations!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/19/2022 5:12:00 PM

So happy you like this one Christuraj: I tend to think of the spirit of Autumn as a female as you will see a lot of poems on a similar vein sprinkled through my poems.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 10/24/2021 9:41:00 AM

Suzanne, The mystery and magic of autumn are beautifully captured with your skillful verse. Blessings, Paulette

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 11/2/2021 2:32:00 AM

I appreciate your kind words, Paulette. A lovely and inspiring time of year. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/4/2021 6:06:00 AM

This is a magical piece. You have such a sweet way of expressing yourself. Blessings Rick.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/23/2021 4:19:00 PM

Thanks so much, Rich. I really appreciate your encouraging words. SuZ

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/3/2021 5:00:00 PM

SuZ, the colors you describe convey warm autumn hues that belie the approaching chill. Your artwork is outstanding. I enjoy the beauty of this season you so creatively express. Thank you for your thoughtful comments about my son. I know everyone’s prayers saved him. So nice to read your poetry again. Blessings xxoo

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/23/2021 4:25:00 PM

Hi Connie: Thanks for your sweet comment on my Autumn poem. Who would have believed that I would get so much inspiration from Fall after living in the tropics for most of my life. I am glad your son continues to improve.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/1/2021 11:33:00 AM

A creative write and collage. You are filled with all kinds of talent. Can you wear the dress??? Are going to fame it??? Have blessed day writing away..............

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 10/3/2021 3:45:00 PM

Hi Paula. Thanks for your lovely visit. It is only made of paper and I gave it away to a friend that loved it. I can always make another if I want to. Have a wonderful week. SuZ

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/27/2021 6:04:00 PM

Hello Suzanne ... certainly a great description of autumn as it prepares for the winter to follow - thank you Suzanne - Lindsay

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/28/2021 2:53:00 AM

Hi Lindsay: Always so nice to hear from you. If anything can awaken my Muse- it’s Autumn. Best, SuZ

Gary Radice

Date: 9/27/2021 10:38:00 AM

I love the personification in your poem and for some reason the word 'woodsmoke'..It is conjuring up so many visions and sounds and smells for me in just the one word. The collage is brilliant too. Cheers - Gary

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 9/28/2021 2:51:00 AM

Thanks for your thoughtful comment, Gary and making me feel good today about my art etc. Cheers, SuZ