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goddess of all waters

"goddess of all waters" goddess of all waters you hypnotize you mesmerize leaving souls forever whole as you guard the mighty seas you unveil wonders of it all the beauty of your world the play only whales know visions that only seagulls see goddess of all waters you live and breathe SkyWatcher 01-21-24

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Date: 1/26/2024 3:26:00 AM
Dear Lisa, your word weaving truly left me in awe captivated. As someone that loves water I couldn’t help but admire the flow and how you’ve created this in the theme of goddess of water: i always love the evocative touch in your poems and how seamlessly your words flow. I especially loved the lines “ as you guard the mighty seas you unveil wonders of it all the beauty of your world the play only whales know“ my mermaid heart feels the depth of that, and i can see the beauty of this world! FAVE
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/2/2024 8:35:00 AM
Hello Empress. Thank you ever so much. Truly. Please excuse this short reply. I do not take you for granted. Have a wonderful Day. I will see you shortly on your page. Blessings always. (smile)
Date: 1/24/2024 3:23:00 AM
Gone forever? No compassion. And love was always there.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/2/2024 8:33:00 AM
Thank You
Date: 1/23/2024 11:32:00 AM
This is an awesome poem my friend, you have created an alluring, fascinating and mysterious goddess who only whales and seagulls see. Keep guarding 'the mighty seas' as ;you unveil wonders of it all, the 'beauty of your world'. have faved this poem. HUGS, LOVE AND BLESSINGS LISA. Jennifer.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/2/2024 8:33:00 AM
Hi Jennifer. Hugs love and blessings back to you. Thank you. Please excuse this short reply. Have a wonderful day. I will see you shortly on your page. Thank you. (smile)
Date: 1/22/2024 3:22:00 PM
A lovely tribute to the goddess of the waters, Lisa. Acknowledging the powers greater than we, is important in learning the appreciate the things we can't really understand. Delightful poetry, my dear friend. Hugs, Bill
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/2/2024 8:32:00 AM
Hugs back to you Mr. Bill. Please forgive this short reply. Hi. Thank you very much. Have a wonderful day. a I will see you shortly on your page. Blessings always (smile)
Date: 1/22/2024 11:07:00 AM
I wonder how many souls have prayed to the goddess of the water at that fateful time. Why does the sea invite you in and keep you.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/2/2024 8:31:00 AM
Hello Paul. What a wonderful response to which I had to reply. The ocean and sea have been in my soul since I was a child and has remained. There is no place on earth like. One has to be before her in person for all the wonder.... May this day find you well. I will see you on your page very soon. (smile)
Date: 1/22/2024 10:24:00 AM
I love this magical poem. Thanks for the beautiful comment you left for me on my poem
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/2/2024 8:28:00 AM
Hello Andrea. Hi. I hope you are well. Thank you very much. Please excuse this short reply. I will see you soon on your page. Have a wonderful day. (smile)
Date: 1/21/2024 8:40:00 AM
such an enchanting poem, dear Lisa, about the beauty of the sea and the goddess who guards it. Breathtaking words...loved it..have a great Sunday, Sara
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/2/2024 8:27:00 AM
Hi Sara. Thank you Thank you. Please excuse this short reply. I will see you on your page shorty. Have a wonderful day now and always. Peace....... (smile)
Date: 1/21/2024 8:37:00 AM
A beautiful poem this is, dear Lisa.. Describing the enchanting essence of marine sceneries & the Goddess of water who guards those mighty seas.. Ahh, your wordplay is absolutely gorgeous and meaningful.. "goddess of all waters you live and breathe" Wonderfully crafted! Sending you many best wishes & light ~
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 2/2/2024 8:25:00 AM
Thank you ever so much Hiya. Truly. Hello. Wishing you best wishes and light now and always as well. I will see you on your page. Have a wonderful day. (smile) Please excuse this short reply.

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