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Goddess Grip

She struts with a strategic lust punishing hesitation with voluptuous thrust, invading my chamber of fresh heart and hard part certain for her meal of tender male from the start, perfume from waving sea spreading broadly through this fantasy skin textured fine with urge for pulsing vine, Goddess grins robustly, she walks in rosebud red stalks the songs and lips within this throbing head, the call she croons to with curving tongue door of desire widens to release a white river upon breasts divinely hung - J.A.B.

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/10/2014 1:49:00 AM

Most women know what they want and how to get at it, and when they find it, they don't let it go... The way you've described her presence is very powerful. She is so magnetic and seductive. Another amazing write from you, Justin!

Justin Bordner
Date: 11/11/2014 8:16:00 PM

I am her heart target Kelly...she is more than a woman, she is enlightenment...I gladly serve my Goddess the richest sustenance. Your poetry opens my senses Kelly...J.A.B.

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/28/2014 7:57:00 PM

Esquisitely done! You've painted an awesome image with your words and a lot of lust and passion! Will read more of your poems shortly! Thank you for sharing!

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/31/2014 8:20:00 PM

To make paintings of lust and passion requires paints mixed with blood and soul Suzanne. I appreciate your intense reaction. J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/19/2014 6:39:00 AM

again!! so alive in every word!!!!!

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/19/2014 8:53:00 PM

Yes Olive, yes...alive in every nerve, every need becoming justified...J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/17/2014 1:39:00 PM

"breasts divinely hung" for her sake hopefuly her suitor is as well. Great line and great poem Justin!

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/17/2014 8:57:00 PM

I have been endowed with many blessings Richard, I give my Goddess new depths of affection! I thrilled you enjoyed this feast of divine love. J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 10/16/2014 8:31:00 PM

The word voluptuous caught my attention as I scan this poem Justin. Structured well, a passionate piece as well. Loved it! Verlena

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/18/2014 1:45:00 PM

I knew you would Verlena, it is a passionate mystery of intense appetites. J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/15/2014 8:20:00 PM

Surely there is inimitable, passionate , daring freedom in the great Goddess Grip! Lovely poem Justin; quite magical actually. I really like the inner pulse of this poem. Reading it aloud, it actually flows very well, as do a lot of your verses. Your words just have that grip on me. In sensuous effect, you mold metaphor like no other. I really like the punishing hesitation line-this Goddess is beyond charm and chivalry. Thoroughly intrigued yet again! Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/15/2014 8:51:00 PM

A freedom to be brave in her ravishing. I love it when you tell what's magical Laura, I know you are! Yes, she is beyond permission, she conquers! Your comments are an honor, so happy you feel the grip of the magic rhythm Laura...J.A.B.

Ettie Christian-Bowling

Date: 10/15/2014 1:56:00 PM

The passion in this poem is clear to see....Vivid write...-Love Ettie

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/15/2014 8:46:00 PM

Ettie, the passion is nrctar, the vision pure...thank you for the love Ettie...J.A.B.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/14/2014 11:21:00 PM

VERY descriptive of this goddess. I think she is Aphrodite!! thanks for your comments on my poems today!

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/15/2014 8:43:00 PM

Your poetry and personality are always a source of joy and mysterious stimulation for me Andrea. I'm sure you know something about Goddess seduction Andrea...J.A.B.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/14/2014 12:19:00 PM

my, my, justin...I need oxygen after having savored this piece which reels of pure ecstasy.. each line brings the next to one big peak experience, from the meal of a tender male to breasts divinely hung... thanks too for having me in your contest...huggs

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/15/2014 8:25:00 PM

Nette, the spirit of your work is truly sensational, your skill absolutely marvelous! It is my pleasure and inspiration to have ypu in mind and contest. Yes, they share a landscape swelled in seduction's sweetest season Nette...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/14/2014 11:06:00 AM

'She walks in rosebud red /stalks the songs and lips within this throbbing head'-It seems this Goddess played all her powers upon you.A very beautiful poem,with a very seductive ending.Seductive yet sweet She seems fulfilling a fantasy and a dream.Beautiful,Justin.

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/15/2014 8:16:00 PM

Her powers are my purpose, her ravagings my blessings Charma. There is no harm in this encounter, only reward. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/14/2014 3:11:00 AM

Justin...I'm here to thank you for my placement in your contest. I'm ....literally .....overwhelmed. So so happy! For a while there, I thought I wouldn't make it, but...I'm so glad I did. Thanks...I'm flying high! Rosebud red is an inviting color...Every woman should have red in her wardrobe. I've been told it suits me whenever I wear it! :) Lovely poem here! Thanks again for the placement. I'm...honored!

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/15/2014 1:32:00 AM

Your sense of seduction is instictive in intensity, raw in ravishing pursuit, natural in victory. Red just fits you so differently Eileen, so very seductively! Congratulations Eileen, for being an absolute Masterpiece...Justin

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/13/2014 8:11:00 AM

Wonderfully seductive, masterfully crafted. Excellent!

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/13/2014 6:34:00 PM

A Goddess is all these things Maurice, thank you. J.A.B.

Shelly James

Date: 10/13/2014 3:11:00 AM

Good way of poetry and the language is also nice..Great beauty

Justin Bordner
Date: 10/13/2014 6:33:00 PM

Good fortune of seduction Shelly, mercy in release. J.A.B.