God, the Romantic

The earth says goodnight as the sun lowers for a kiss,
While the moon edges upward, overlooking in the sky
The mountain tops reach with snowy crescent, white
As the valleys welcome shade, a blanket to the eye.
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The earth is enshrouded in darkness, but also with light
As the luminescent radiance of the moon sets the scene
I, walking the valley, with my lover’s hand in mine
Smile in her presence, with a love, never fleeing.
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With a look…a shadow…the moon casts upon her face
She never looked lovelier…than she does at this time
As if God, himself, lit the candles, upon our tables
Leaving us to dance…to enjoy our love…sublime.
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He even plays the music, by which our hearts beat along
The musician that He is, selecting beautiful nature, to play.
My lover and I enjoying the evening set for just us two
While God sets this scene, before night turns to day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/1/2009 11:49:00 AM
Oh how lovely Michael. Such beautiful imagery. And the line 'The musician that He is, selecting beautiful nature, to play'...nature does have beautiful music if we just close our eyes and listen.
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Date: 2/28/2009 9:22:00 AM
beautiful poetic artful well though out and presented. John H Loving III
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Date: 2/28/2009 7:49:00 AM
Like the contrasts of the first and last lines Michael.This is a gem.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 2/27/2009 6:56:00 PM
Michael I reckon that God must be quite the romantic though I never really thought about it before - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/27/2009 6:55:00 PM
There is so much love written here, enjoy every minute you have.....always, Christy
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Date: 2/27/2009 6:45:00 PM
OH I love this especially the first line. Wowsers Michael its pretty.
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Date: 2/27/2009 2:53:00 PM
Michael Beautiful imagery and flow in your wonderful words! I love the line where you say" I, walking the valley, with my lover’s hand in mine" Great write my friend! Laura :)
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Date: 2/27/2009 1:07:00 PM
You have penned such a beautiful rhyme here, Michael! Your visuals are awesome and such tender love flows so sweetly through this. Simply lovely, Michael, and a pleasure to read! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/27/2009 12:34:00 PM
Beautiful write here Michael! Reads like a song.
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