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God, the Great Creator

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             On a crisp cool autumn evening,
             stars filled the night up high.
             God, the great creator,
             names each star in the sky.

             A garden lit by the moonlight.
             A rose kissed by His hand.
             The beauty He created,
             even the smallest pieces of the sand.

             The velvet petals of the roses,
             glistens in the night.
             The Master of Creation,
             His colors pure delight.

             From void, He created beauty.
             From dark, He created light.
             The Master of creations,
             and to man He gave them life.




                   Written  1-2-17
              revised  on 1-20-2022

Copyright © Debra L Brown | Year Posted 2022

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Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 2/12/2022 4:25:00 PM The glory of God's beauteous creation is felt throughout these imagery rich lines, Debra. I love the picture, too. Blessings, Evelyn :) Login to Reply Debra L Brown Date: 2/12/2022 7:12:00 PM Thank You Evelyn for your lovely comment. Blessings my friend ~ Debra

Hilo Poet Date: 2/2/2022 6:15:00 AM Beautifully penned, Debra, as your appropriated words set a sublime theme as if by magic liken the authoress! Nicely done my friend, Aloha! Login to Reply Debra L Brown Date: 2/2/2022 12:58:00 PM Thanks William for your comment and your kind words. Blessings ~ Debra

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 2/1/2022 7:41:00 PM A great piece to glorify God Debra, lovely rhyme and flow with really good imagery too. Blessings always,Gordon Login to Reply Debra L Brown Date: 2/5/2022 8:16:00 PM Thank you Gordon for your kind words. Blessings ~ Debra

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/30/2022 2:25:00 PM The most amazing thing he ever did was create us, and give us carte blanche, love this Deb. xo Login to Reply Debra L Brown Date: 2/5/2022 8:25:00 PM Rose thank you for your comment. God is so amazing as you can see the beauty in every thing He has made. We are made in His image (spirit). We should be humbled to be given such a gift from Him. Thank you Rose for your comment. Hugs ~ Debra

Harry Horsman Date: 1/23/2022 8:58:00 PM Lovely poetry, Debra, such sincerity. Login to Reply Debra L Brown Date: 1/27/2022 2:44:00 PM Thank you, I'm glad you like the poem. Blessings ~ Debra

Anil Deo Date: 1/21/2022 9:46:00 PM A masterpiece in my book Sis. Praise Jesus, our Holy Trinity. U r a Star Login to Reply Debra L Brown Date: 1/22/2022 8:41:00 AM Thank you Anil, I'm humbled by your kind words. Prayers & Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/21/2022 5:36:00 PM Beautiful! Login to Reply Debra L Brown Date: 1/22/2022 8:39:00 AM Thanks Kim for your kind words. Blessings ~ Debra

Heidi Sands Date: 1/21/2022 4:10:00 PM Beautifully written Debra :) Login to Reply Debra L Brown Date: 1/21/2022 4:46:00 PM Heidi your so sweet, I enjoyed your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Rico Leffanta Date: 1/21/2022 10:29:00 AM He? Login to Reply Debra L Brown Date: 1/21/2022 1:12:00 PM Thanks Rico for your comment. "Diety" is always capitalize. Blessings, Debra

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/21/2022 2:12:00 AM God is so immense that he gave us a variety of beautiful things to bless Him daily. Alas man thinks he did a lot by himself. Oh man how foolish you can be. Kneel and adore. Login to Reply Debra L Brown Date: 1/21/2022 1:36:00 PM Victory, Your words were like music to my ears. I enjoyed your comment.Blessings ~ Debra

Valsa George Date: 1/20/2022 11:26:00 PM God, the master craftsman with His dexterous hands created the universe and everything in it and lovingly bequeathed all to man. A poem describing God's wondrous work....! Login to Reply Debra L Brown Date: 1/21/2022 1:44:00 PM Vasal, Thank you for your kind words. I enjoyed your comment. I would have loved to have seen the "Garden of Eden." I don't think there would have been any words to describe it.Thank you for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra