John Hamilton Poet Pleiades

God Pleiades

God Pleiades

Goodness in abundance
Generous without fault
Grandiose by nature
Greatness never excelled
Galactic Sovereign
Gladness in the heavens
Gavel in hand judges.

2nd attempt at a Pleiades it's difficult but I enjoy it, hope you do too.
First Place Winner

John Derek Hamilton    November 22,2015

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Andrea Dietrich July 1, 2020 at 10:32 PM aha, I clicked on a page really far back and found your first pleiades. Whatever happened to those contests? I remember they got about halfway through the alphabet and ended. A very belated congrats for this one, Good job. John Hamilton July 2, 2020 at 9:04 AM Wow Andrea you went back in a time machine for this one, thanks for your kind visit!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 30, 2015 at 3:14 AM Congrats John.. wonderful write!! John Hamilton November 30, 2015 at 5:40 AM Thanks Dr, always appreciate your visits, and comments.JDH

Skat A November 28, 2015 at 3:25 PM John, Congrats on your fine win, SKAT LOVE John Hamilton November 28, 2015 at 8:49 PM Thanks Skat for your visits and comments, always appreciated. JDH

Lin Lane November 28, 2015 at 7:12 AM Congratulations, John...now you must continue writing Pleiades. John Hamilton November 28, 2015 at 8:48 PM Thanks Lin I think I will! John

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 28, 2015 at 5:14 AM Congratulations John

Eve Roper November 27, 2015 at 8:30 PM John, I like the subject you chose nicely written and congratulations on your 1st place win. Eve John Hamilton November 27, 2015 at 10:47 PM Thanks Eve really appreciate your visit and talent. JDH

Connie Marcum Wong November 27, 2015 at 6:08 PM You excelled with this John! Congratulations on your super win! John Hamilton November 27, 2015 at 10:45 PM Thanks Connie I appreciate your kind visit and comments. JDH

Jan Allison November 27, 2015 at 4:47 PM you did great for a second attempt John congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx John Hamilton November 27, 2015 at 10:42 PM Thanks Jan very kind. John

Kim Merryman November 27, 2015 at 3:21 PM John, this one snuck in but I'm glad it did! A great acknowledgement of God's attributes! Congrats on your 1st place win and in learning a new poetry form! Love, Kim John Hamilton November 27, 2015 at 10:34 PM Thanks so much Kim this is totally unexpected. Thanks for sponsoring it. God bless. John

Richard Lamoureux November 23, 2015 at 8:51 AM I am not familiar with the form but you have me wanting to check it out. John Hamilton November 23, 2015 at 11:08 AM Thanks for your kind visit, I am humbled. Silent one explains the form in one of his recent postings, so when you know the rules away you go. Looking forward to learning from you. JDH

Lin Lane November 22, 2015 at 7:40 PM Glad you're having fun with these, John. I think you've got the hang of it, and what a worthy subject. John Hamilton November 26, 2015 at 11:25 PM Thanks Lin missed this somehow before thanks for visit.