God Orchestrates a Momentous Morning

A new morning, bright, not in its light, but in its brilliant composure.
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God Orchestrates a Momentous Morning

As the sun provides a scintilla of light
at dawn, and the clouds squeeze out
slight sprinkling, atmosphere tweets
along with the daybirds and hoots
with the owl. S u d d e n  downpour -
delightful the serendipitous chorus.

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Date: 5/7/2025 12:29:00 PM
B E A U T I FU L writing, sudden wonder, lol <3 xxoo
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Paige Hind
Date: 5/9/2025 1:14:00 PM
:)....remember to look in your own mirror <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2025 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, beautiful lady!
Date: 5/7/2025 11:43:00 AM
Wow this is just beyond gorgeous! How descriptive and artistic is the way youv woven your words and painted imagery! I especially cant get over the line "and the clouds squeeze out slight sprinkling" just beautiful! This is a fave for me dear kim! Sending you light always
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2025 1:26:00 PM
Thank you so very much!
Date: 5/7/2025 10:18:00 AM
What a creative write you have here. God does a great job. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2025 10:58:00 AM
Blessings, dear one! Thank you!
Date: 5/7/2025 6:53:00 AM
Lovely writing, Kim; divine poetry. Pure and brilliant, like your merciful sun.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2025 10:59:00 AM
To see light, even in its dimmed form is a blessing. Bird tweets and not total silence, delights the ears? Thank you, dear friend,
Date: 5/7/2025 6:39:00 AM
God’s orchestra has been playing a symphony for me all morning. Thundering drums and cymbals to accompany the gentle notes of rainfall. Great lines, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2025 10:59:00 AM
Woohoo! xx Thank you, dear one!
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