God Needed Another Angel

God needed another angel so He took you. So be good kind and respectful. Mind your manners. Always remember to say please and thank-you. Let the littles go first and be helpful to them. Clean up all the messes you make. Brush your theeth. Take your bath and be sure to clean behind your ears. Never use cross words. Always share your toys and take turns. Before you lay down at night Bless everyone in your prayers. God needed another angel so He took you. My mind asking why? My heart broken beyond repair. The pieces have been blown away from the mighty winds. You were just on loan to me from God. Now He needed another angel so I had to give you back. God needed another angel and He choose you.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2013 10:27:00 PM

:-) enjoying your Featured Poem of the week. take care and have yourself a great coming week. xox~ LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/4/2013 10:17:00 AM

AUTHOR, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. have a nice 4th of July. *SKAT

Sammy Shaq

Date: 4/26/2009 7:29:00 PM

Very interesting format here, something I've never seen before. Fantastic write, with intriguing vocab. Love, Sami.`

Date: 4/26/2009 2:22:00 PM

Interesting format for a heartfelt poem. To lose a child has to be one of the hardest things to bear. The emotion comes through your words. Blessings to you for sharing this poem with us. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/26/2009 1:50:00 PM

It's always a mystery to me why God chooses to "lend" children. I had tears in my eyes reading this. I hope this is not about a personal experience, but my heart goes out to all parents whose children become "angels." Love, Carolyn

Diane Christian

Date: 4/26/2009 12:39:00 PM

aww well written, may Gods' peace and Love be with you, God bless from diane

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/26/2009 12:03:00 PM

Love the form to this piece and the theme..well written.

James Faulkner

Date: 4/26/2009 10:37:00 AM

very nice i really liked the formate. very well writting- love and peace:james

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/26/2009 10:23:00 AM

This can make one happy, or sad....I prefer to make it a peaceful, hopeful poem. ~ Love, Carrie

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/26/2009 9:26:00 AM

Rhonda, such sweet emotion as this is surely why the aliens envy us.....(I couldn't help the cliche) but it was either try to lighten myself up after reading this (I have a lot to do today)or run amok, sobbing in the streets below. snap...I'm ok now! well written! Rhonda! you're friend ...Jim