Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson Poet Free verse

God Needed Another Angel

God 
needed
another
angel
so
He
took
you.
So
be
good
kind
and
respectful.
Mind
your
manners.
Always
remember 
to
say
please
and
thank-you.
Let
the
littles
go
first
and
be
helpful
to 
them.
Clean
up
all 
the
messes
you
make.
Brush
your
theeth.
Take
your
bath
and
be 
sure
to
clean
behind
your
ears.
Never
use
cross
words.
Always
share
your
toys
and
take
turns.
Before
you
lay
down
at
night
Bless
everyone
in
your
prayers.
God
needed
another
angel
so
He
took
you.
My
mind
asking
why?
My
heart
broken
beyond
repair.
The
pieces
have
been
blown
away
from
the
mighty
winds.
You
were
just
on
loan
to
me
from
God.
Now
He
needed
another
angel
so
I
had
to
give
you
back.
God
needed
another
angel
and
He
choose
you.

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Poet Destroyer A July 6, 2013 at 10:27 PM :-) enjoying your Featured Poem of the week. take care and have yourself a great coming week. xox~ LINDA

Skat A July 4, 2013 at 10:17 AM AUTHOR, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. have a nice 4th of July. *SKAT

Sami Al-Khalili April 26, 2009 at 7:29 PM Very interesting format here, something I've never seen before. Fantastic write, with intriguing vocab. Love, Sami.`

April 26, 2009 at 2:22 PM Interesting format for a heartfelt poem. To lose a child has to be one of the hardest things to bear. The emotion comes through your words. Blessings to you for sharing this poem with us. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire April 26, 2009 at 1:50 PM It's always a mystery to me why God chooses to "lend" children. I had tears in my eyes reading this. I hope this is not about a personal experience, but my heart goes out to all parents whose children become "angels." Love, Carolyn

Diane Christian April 26, 2009 at 12:39 PM aww well written, may Gods' peace and Love be with you, God bless from diane

Christopher Higgins April 26, 2009 at 12:03 PM Love the form to this piece and the theme..well written.

James Faulkner April 26, 2009 at 10:37 AM very nice i really liked the formate. very well writting- love and peace:james

Carrie Richards April 26, 2009 at 10:23 AM This can make one happy, or sad....I prefer to make it a peaceful, hopeful poem. ~ Love, Carrie

James Marshall Goff April 26, 2009 at 9:26 AM Rhonda, such sweet emotion as this is surely why the aliens envy us.....(I couldn't help the cliche) but it was either try to lighten myself up after reading this (I have a lot to do today)or run amok, sobbing in the streets below. snap...I'm ok now! well written! Rhonda! you're friend ...Jim