Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

God Knows Where I Am-'Lost In Phantom Night'

Walking corridors of derailed delusions
I welcome my created confined confusions
For I am lost in phantom night...

I dance with demons deploying death
Desirous destruction of my life’s last breath
Consciously cocooned manic moonlight...

A bipolar bliss within tangled time
Waiting for a savior of an angels chime
For I am lost in phantom night...

Secluded silences in a whirlpool of winter
My starving soul soaked in a lachrymal linger
Tormented tears taking fatalistic flight...

Only God knows where I am
Devoured by lions this gentle lamb
Farewell to this nefarious night...




June.07.2017
God Knows Where I Am - Contest
Sponsored by: craig cornish

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Craig Cornish June 13, 2017 at 10:38 AM WW-Your take on this was cleverly poetic, your use of assonance and alliteration helped pull the feeling together. Winged Warrior June 13, 2017 at 4:59 PM Thank you so kindly Craig...god bless...^WW^

Carrie Richards June 11, 2017 at 8:28 PM Indeed "lost" is the best description of this tragic true event. It breaks the heart to know it truly happened because of an illness that couldn't be silenced. What a gifted pen you have. Well done ! Winged Warrior June 12, 2017 at 10:31 AM Thank you so much, Carrie, for the kind comment...god bless...^WW^

Joseph May June 11, 2017 at 1:57 PM Congrats on your win Winged Warrior Winged Warrior June 12, 2017 at 10:30 AM Thank you again, Joseph...god bless my friend...^WW^

Kenny Gwena June 9, 2017 at 10:01 PM Congratulations. Awesome work. Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 10:33 PM Thank you so much, Kenny...god bless...^WW^

Heidi Sands June 9, 2017 at 4:41 PM Congratulations! Well done :) Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 10:30 PM Thank you Heidi...god bless...^WW^

Akkina Downing June 9, 2017 at 2:43 PM Congratulations on your awesome potd, WW...hugs :) Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 10:28 PM Thank you Akkina...hope all is well my friend...god bless...^WW^

Eye Truth-Teller June 9, 2017 at 12:04 PM Congrats on POTD Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 10:27 PM Thank you friend...all the best and god bless...^WW^

Lenna Walker June 9, 2017 at 11:22 AM Congrats on POTD, well deserved ! Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 10:25 PM Thank you Lenna...god bless...^WW^

Sara Ella June 9, 2017 at 10:03 AM Very well done, WW! Congratulations on the POTD :) Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 10:25 PM Thank you Sara...god bless...^WW^

Sunlite Wanter June 9, 2017 at 9:58 AM I'm going to save this one for it gives me understanding of the bi polars in my family. Thank you for your openness and a beautifully written poem. Congratulations! Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 10:23 PM Thank you Sunlite...god bless...^WW^

Charlie Smith June 9, 2017 at 9:16 AM So very well done WW, congratulations for POTD honors. Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 10:22 PM Thank you Chuck...it would not be complete without you my friend...all the best...^WW^

Daniel Turner June 9, 2017 at 7:30 AM Hey Wingman, congratulations on POTD. Great poem, should do very well in contest:) Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 10:17 PM Thank you dear friend...hope your doing O.K Daniel...god bless...^WW^

Agnes Krampe June 9, 2017 at 6:11 AM Congrats on POTD, W.W. Great use of alliterations. Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 10:16 PM Thank you Agnes...hope all is good...god bless...^WW^

Joseph May June 9, 2017 at 5:26 AM A sad journey into the "phantom night"...Congrats on POtd Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 10:15 PM Thank you, Joseph...how are you, my friend...^WW^

Maria Williams June 9, 2017 at 3:41 AM Congrats on POTD..... Maria Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 9:58 PM Thank you Maria...all the best...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2017 at 2:39 AM - CONGRATULATIONS P.O.T.D. :) Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 9:53 PM Thank you...I had no idea...all the best ...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2017 at 1:56 PM - A great description of deep feelings and pain W.W. - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 9:52 PM Thank you dear Anne-Lise...hope all is well in beautiful Norway...god bless...^WW^

Lin Lane June 7, 2017 at 7:09 AM You're not lost, my warrior friend, just entangled in a web of fantastic alliteration. God always knows where each of us can be found. Hang on...I'm coming after you. This is written so very well. Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 9:42 PM Thank you, dear lady Lin...I'm waiting for you...with a pen, paper, and a brush lol...god bless...^WW^

White Wolf June 7, 2017 at 7:04 AM ^WW^, I have bipolar type 3 or cyclothymia (Rapid) And even I can't describe as well as your beautiful pen! I simply have to fav this write, my friend! (It is the psychotic episodes that are both frightening and fantastic in one) Very hard to explain! Thank you for this! Winged Warrior June 9, 2017 at 9:33 PM Thank you dear friend...I'm very sorry to hear about your condition...but I guess we all have skeletons in our closets...my ex-wife was somewhere between bipolar and schizophrenic...so I have a little experience about it but no real solution...especially around the late 70's early 80's...very little help then...sadly it cost us our marriage...it was very troubling to see a young child trapped inside an adult body...so now I understand a bit...take care Wolfie...^WW^