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God Created Lullaby

Cascading water
dancing like ballerina
down the green mountain
singing a sweet melody
God-created lullaby.





© kashinath karmakar(27th Dec.2011)
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Placement:5th; (Dec.2011)

Contest:Short and Sweet

Sponsor:Francine Roberts

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Maureen Lefanue

January 21, 2012 at 3:50 AM

Thank you Kash for your kind congratulations. Take care, Maureen :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 6, 2012 at 5:47 AM

Congrats on your win in Francine's "Short and Sweet" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 5, 2012 at 6:34 AM

Congratulations on your win in ~Brian's~ "Image" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi

January 4, 2012 at 9:23 AM

A God created lullaby, peaceful I bet. Would love to hear that every night :)

Debbie Guzzi

January 3, 2012 at 3:26 PM

Stream sounds are always so dreamy! Nice win here my friend! Congrad's Light & Love

Suresh Babu Palani

January 2, 2012 at 10:13 AM

Beautiful piece! Congrats on your win and happy new year to you too.

Gwendolen Song

January 2, 2012 at 8:46 AM

Hope you don't mind me here, Kash..I changed this phenomenol poem to present tense as tho I were just standing there writing as I experienced it..Here goes..Cascading water, dances like ballerina, down the green mountain, singing a sweet melody, God is creating a lullaby...how do you mesmerize me with your words?? wow. I know it's no longer a tanka,,,oh well.

Wilma Neels

January 1, 2012 at 12:04 PM

This is a beauty Kash and congratulations on your win as well :) Happy New Year to you and your family :)

Nette Onclaud

January 1, 2012 at 3:08 AM

this lyrical piece is a gold topper for me , kashi... reminds me of osho ( from india) when he is reverent and gracious!...congrats with hugggs!

Andrea Dietrich

December 31, 2011 at 4:23 PM

Congratulations, looks like you and I both got HM's but it's better than nothing. I have two more contest poems to post but hate putting them up when I still have not had many hits on last poem. how is your cute son and his writing? I'm watching a really funny movie about an American in India. It's called Outsourced. Heard of it? I won't have time to be here tomorrow probably. Happy New years!!