God

I gazed upon your face, oh Lord And the fires of hell extinguished their sting and wept for mercy. I heard your voice call me, oh Lord And the army of heaven carried me away. I felt your love touch me, oh Lord And i knew i was home. I am this Earth and Heaven above. I have not forsaken you as you have not forsaken me.

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/26/2015 3:47:00 AM

Wow....beautiful work... I'm really enjoying reading your poetry tonight. The third stanza is very heartfelt, and that last stanza is magnificent. Always, Laura

Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Date: 6/1/2015 8:54:00 PM

Inspiring and very touching words and lines, "I felt your love touch me, oh Lord And i knew i was home." This had been so vividly true for me. Thanks for the poem.

David Nickle Read

Date: 12/21/2014 6:25:00 PM

Good to see someone writing of God so freely, and in such an honest, uplifting way, nice write man. ~ David

Wayne Riley
Date: 12/21/2014 8:20:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful comment David. I really appreciate it and so glad you enjoyed my work......Have a fantastic Christmas.