Goblins In the Oaks

I was going to a haunted house, a ghoulish affair Advertised in town with signs noting, "BEWARE." They were posted with this cautionary warning: "If you enter, there will be reasons for mourning. Zombies will haunt you; you'll shiver with fright. Vampires will be feasting this Halloween night!" I drove to the site, looking forward to each hoax but stopped when I saw goblins flying in the oaks. They looked so real, but I knew it was only trickery. I was ready to face the beasts, spooks and witchery. I ventured into the eerie house, a smile on my face until spiders fell on my head. This was a horrible place! I saw a headless creature, blood gushing everywhere. In the horror of the scene, I screamed words of swear! I've never been inclined to use expletives of profanity, but fear beseiged my senses near the point of insanity! Something wet touched my neck, and I was paralyzed. A freaky creature approached, as an alien, disguised. I kicked the diabolic fiend, hell-bent on my abduction, not scared enough to fall for a phony Martian seduction. It had been a maze of dark corridors, frightfully bizarre. All too realistic, I thought, as I walked back to my car. I didn't notice the cluster of spiders crawling behind me and laughed as the speakers faked the wails of a banshee. It was cleverly staged, and I was impressed by each hoax, until I was captured by those goblins flying in the oaks!!! October 24, 2020 Emile Pinet's Halloween Challenge 10 required words: alien, blood, cautionary, vampires, trickery, abduction, paralyzed, Halloween, feasting, diabolical
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Proxenos Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 12:38 PM
Such a magnificent scary write - best wishes for the contest , I see this as a win, I love scary poems, never had Halloween in South Africa, but slowly people are starting to adopt it, Such fun! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Logan Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 2:14 PM
Thank you, Jennifer. The Halloween writes are fun, but I hope people protect themselves this year, especially their children.
Cunningham Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 8:23 AM
You rose to the challenge well Jenna, you could always add those other stanzas after the contest. You've got me in the Halloween mood now, well written. Tom
Logan Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 6:07 PM
Thanks, Tom. I think I still have them on file.
Koplin Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 7:15 AM
Incredible Jenna! Goblins in the Oaks, I'm just glad there are no Oak trees very close to my house, oh no I still have a pile of oak logs for firewood in the pasture. Great Poem indeed!!
Logan Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 7:32 AM
Thank you, Mark. I was just writing away and had to delete a couple of verses so I wouldn't go over the limit. It was a fun challenge.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 5:54 AM
WOW. You did such a tremendous job with this theme... I'm so impressed. God bless you! Hope you're a winner with this.
Logan Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 7:31 AM
I'm pleased you liked it so well, Regina. Thank you very much for your kind thoughts.
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