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Go, Hold Her

` “Where are you?” she cries to sleep, though prays she won’t to blurred stars lingering in the past Arms of little strength reach for weakening moments in dark rooms with plaster feelings The cold slips beneath doorways collecting at her feet, crippling thoughts in glazed over eyes As sorrowed breezes flicker flames of the candle she relights, burning at both ends A melted wax trance, hot on her fingers falls in shapes on a barren floor, question mark drippings For the answers, not found in any book no pages of solutions inked and numbered in reverse order exist and she says she can’t…she won’t fall, but she has and she will to her knees, go… hold her

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Date: 10/28/2019 10:52:00 AM
This paints a powerful picture. Poses questions and sadness and gives a solution to simply hold her. I enjoyed reading this. Kind wishes, Kai
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Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2019 11:26:00 AM
Thank you so very much Kai
Date: 10/25/2019 12:34:00 AM
Love this my friend...
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2019 8:19:00 AM
Thank you HT. I appreciate you.
Date: 10/24/2019 5:08:00 PM
The way you crafted this toward the denouement is masterful, my friend. Excellence in poetry, this! Thanks, Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2019 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much GW. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 10/24/2019 3:20:00 PM
Wow showing your compassionate side I see! Very well written Chris. Still your words amaze me.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2019 3:36:00 PM
Thank you so very much Brenda. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 10/24/2019 2:54:00 PM
Very sad, tender and touching poem. The suffering and sorrow of this young girl/woman rings true. The empathy and deep humanity also. You've connected powerfully with reader.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2019 3:36:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind comments on my work. I appreciate your visit.
Date: 10/24/2019 12:23:00 PM
Hello Chris Green, I say go old her, she needs comfort. Have a nice day my friend. Peace, Love, Joy. Darlene
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2019 12:52:00 PM
Thank you so very much Darlene for your kind words
Date: 10/24/2019 11:28:00 AM
Oh, I love the compassion in this poem. Straight from your heart , Chris. Well written :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2019 12:08:00 PM
Thanks Heidi for your wonderful and humbling thoughts about my poem. Your kindness to me is overwhelming.
Date: 10/24/2019 11:13:00 AM
wow... this one touches in more ways then you know...the depths of these words...perhaps i needed to see something like this today...so the glazed over eyes can see the day more clearly... i love this Chris... this is an amazing poem, so deep...so comforting...hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2019 11:24:00 AM
Happy this one has touched you as it has my friend. Sometimes just a few words can make a difference in someone's day. I am thrilled this poem seems to have done that for you. Thank you so much Sandy.
Date: 10/24/2019 11:13:00 AM
Awesome one, Chris! Panagiota
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2019 11:22:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend.
Date: 10/24/2019 11:07:00 AM
My arms are OUTSTRETCHED...Lovely write my friend...COMPASSION required...
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Chris Green
Date: 10/24/2019 11:22:00 AM
Thanks so very much Arturo. I am happy you liked this one.

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