Go Figure

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These are not quite as organized as those that I saw which were more shaped like a tornado and surfing the air..Sara
As the dust floats on moisture laden air, fog like and heavy
Vultures circle in a narrow tornado shaped pattern
Catching those upper air currents and ride the waves
So do the jets _ride the airways of the sky
Jets consume fuel leave waste of gases and particles
Vultures use no fuel but carrion which they consume
Cleaning up the earth's dead
Then deposit manure to fertilize the land
One designed by God and the other by man
Go figure...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/12/2012 3:05:00 AM
SARA,,, LOL.. YOU MUST BE THINKING I'M BORED... WELL JUST A BIT... BUT, IT'S NICE TO SEE.. ANOTHER ONE OF YOUR POEMS DO SO WELL IN A CONTEST.. CONGRATS... ONCE AGAIN..PD
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Date: 2/8/2012 3:57:00 PM
Go Figure indeeed..a very nice expressed story poem.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 2/7/2012 7:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sara! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:14:00 PM
Congratulations Sara on a great write and a terrific win. Jon
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Date: 2/7/2012 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your placement in P.D's "Any Poem You Wrote This Week" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:50:00 PM
Sara, congrats... on your wonderful win.. thank you for your support ;-)' always PD
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Date: 2/6/2012 3:35:00 PM
Aussie crows do the same job down here in Australia....Well done here Sara...good comparison vulture an Jet...
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Date: 2/6/2012 1:54:00 PM
congrats Sara on a wonderful second place win for this exciting entry luv..
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Date: 2/6/2012 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Sara. Matter can never be destroyed; just converted from one form to another. We live in an organic world.
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Date: 2/6/2012 11:38:00 AM
Sara congrats on your win..David
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Date: 2/6/2012 11:19:00 AM
Never thought of it quite that way Sara, but I think you are right. Congrats
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Date: 2/6/2012 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/6/2012 5:57:00 AM
Awesome poem ans a well deserved win. I really enjoy poems that make me think of things I haven't thought of before, this poem fits that criteria. It is poems like this that helps me grow as a prospective poet. It is a very deep and well thought out work. Thanks for sharing it and congrats on your win........S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/6/2012 5:09:00 AM
Man could never stand up to the wonderful creations of God, right?..You penned this one humorously. Congrats, Gwendolen
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Date: 2/6/2012 3:43:00 AM
Very clever and very nice. Congratulations Sara x
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Date: 2/5/2012 1:10:00 PM
I love the way your mind works, my friend. Thought provoking piece indeed
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Date: 2/4/2012 2:04:00 PM
my, the images here strike, sara... a taunting, beautiful piece!.. how are you?.. :) hugggs
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Date: 2/4/2012 1:09:00 PM
It is always a pleasure,Sara - love it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/4/2012 11:43:00 AM
Yes,........Loved as I feel, it's true. Enjoyed,bl
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Date: 2/4/2012 8:13:00 AM
Very creative poem Sara, Gods design is always the best. love Elizabeth
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