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Go Figure

The places we chose to put ourselves willingly, unwillingly. Past lives linger and we emerge with a scream spitting the remnant wombs from pursed lips producing the perennial pucker the seeking sucking sounds as we search for this incarnation's tit. Why does one leave the shelter of wing the warmth of nest and with bowed head search the syllabi of society for meaning from the first scream while others linger in reminiscence of a lost dream? Thrown from the warmth of family the naive can chose to fade, to wilt, to die or to rise wide eyed center stage spitting angry ugliness back at the defilers or smiling sweet dishonesties like overcoats woolly and warm on a bitter winters day. Karma its existence a righteous warning to the wary womb walkers many paths to take, many horizons to bridge and neither smile nor scream may be the proper response go figure....

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Date: 7/25/2011 7:28:00 PM
Go figure, indeed. .. and figure and figure and figure... perennially puckering, seeking, sucking. Love this one, Debbie!
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Date: 7/9/2011 5:14:00 PM
This perplexed me to no end! But I refuse to search the syllabuses of society for meaning.....great line.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/9/2011 5:51:00 PM
hmmmm perhaps it belongs all together on the same line? a syllabus is an ordered outline of what is in the book, what there is to study? wouldn't that be great if when we were born we were given one?
Date: 7/7/2011 8:32:00 AM
This sure is one thought-provoking write, Debbie! Sometimes seems like that's all we can say, "Go figure"-- we try though, we try...
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Date: 7/6/2011 11:31:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today. I enjoyed reading it Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2011 10:09:00 AM
Your writing is my favorite on the site, and this is another fantastic poem I've read of yours. I've never heard f the terms you've suggested since I'm in highschool, and they teach you absolutely nothing there. I will look them up, though; I appreciate your input. Grazie, jessica
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Date: 7/6/2011 8:54:00 AM
Yes, thought provoking indeed...direct, hard-hitting language. You might want to use spell check to correct a couple of minor errors.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/6/2011 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Leo I know I'm on a Mac and used to a PC and can't even FIND the writing program, I will fix it as soon as I get home ;) dern!
Date: 7/6/2011 8:49:00 AM
go figure indeed. Nicely put and thought provoking. BobQ
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