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Go Ahead I Dare Ya Breakup Poetry No One Should See

And He
my dearest
maturest mate to date
has bitterly regressed
to a child irate
from man of logic
to impish state
a hexer vile
filled with hate
while I don't believe
I've changed a bit
he thinks me evil
my mother split
as saccharin 
as the Harpie race
bewitching temptress
evil face
necessity
I do suppose
for his childish fit
to so dispose


Dug out of an old journal for John Lawless' Go Ahead I Dare Ya!!! Contest

Copyright © Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart | Year Posted 2017

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Line Gauthier Date: 10/16/2017 7:31:00 PM Bravo been there too. Well said. Delightful little tirade. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/16/2017 9:09:00 PM Tirade is the perfect word! ;) xomo!

Patricia Cresswell Date: 9/10/2017 9:02:00 AM Love the description Maureen clear and no mistake. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 9/11/2017 8:15:00 AM :) dear diary moment worth sharing

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/29/2017 2:59:00 PM Hello Maureen, glad that you have defended your poetry. A 7 Login to Reply Patricia Cresswell Date: 9/10/2017 9:02:00 AM

Robert Padmore Date: 4/18/2017 5:38:00 AM Very nice poetry Maureen, I love it when it sounds and fits perfectly. And especially when it relates to our lives! Well written a 7 Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/18/2017 7:16:00 AM ;) thanks Robert! bless ya xomo

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 4/12/2017 11:35:00 AM Oh my, this is one cool poem, Maureen! You possess so much verve in this wry, funny poem. He better not touch the wrong nerve. Keep on giggling at your own vitriol. Especially when you gotta let the thunder roll. You are one straight shooting sista. This poem got me smiling ear to ear. Your voice is so good to hear. Love and hugs, my dear. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/12/2017 9:44:00 PM Your generous comment has my own smile popping out my ears! Thank you sweet Freddie, bless your soul xomo

Lim'Rik Flats Date: 4/12/2017 8:58:00 AM Well heckfire, this was a treat with my morning coffee! I always appreciate a sharp scalpel;-) ~ john Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/12/2017 9:38:00 PM Lovely! A note to self I never did intend to share I am elated it has entertained so ;) and the pen as sharp scalpel, them's fabulous poetic words John xomo!

Lisa Ricci Date: 4/8/2017 1:14:00 PM Hello Maureen. Allow me to say the lion is alive and strong. I enjoyed the strength. You certainly met the contest requirements. Thank you for sharing. Best of luck with the contest. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/8/2017 9:00:00 PM :) thank You Lisa!

Darren White Date: 4/6/2017 3:23:00 AM Haha, I love this poem, and all the comments below made me laugh even harder (sorry) :) Good he was no marriage material for you Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/7/2017 6:24:00 PM No apologies required! My sense of humour is very very well developed ;) x's n' o's!

Anne-Marie Coreggia Date: 4/4/2017 9:56:00 PM Wow, Maureen, we sure heard your mighty justified roar loud and clear and I hope this awesome piece will bring you success in the contest :) Amitiés Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/5/2017 5:56:00 AM :) thank You Anne-Marie! Joie! xomo

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/4/2017 3:54:00 PM Oh no, he was the most mature of those you dated? I think you and I have waded in the same gene pool looking for love and finding a bitter child. You definitely fulfilled the contest theme, Maureen. Like the short lines and the rapid-fire descriptions of this "vile" lover. Wishing you success. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/4/2017 4:09:00 PM Giggle ;) well heartbreak can bring out the worst in all of us. I'd say he grew up with our breakup, I "fixed him by breaking him", he was marriage material after me. Sigh. lol xomo!

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/4/2017 2:36:00 PM Oh Ioved this...I could hear you roar...And accepting the daring challenge...with a great response . Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/4/2017 3:03:00 PM Thank you Charmaine; letting it all hang out ;) xomo!

Agnes Krampe Date: 4/4/2017 2:18:00 PM Oh, I like this one. The short lines and repeat rhymes capture the fury well. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/4/2017 3:01:00 PM Thanks Agnes! Fury is a good word for it ;) xomo!

Jan Allison Date: 4/4/2017 1:20:00 PM WOOOHHH You sure packed a punch with this one Maureen - love the choppy lines and the rhyme:-) I would love to hear this read out loud with venom in your voice!:-) am adding this to my faves think it's AWESOME:-):-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/4/2017 2:55:00 PM I am delighted you enjoy it so! Finding it after so long I gotta say it has me giggling at my own vitriol. Bless you! xomo :)

Chris Green Date: 4/4/2017 12:45:00 PM Well, he did dare you and I see you answered that dare wonderfully. Don't you just hate when they revert back to that whining, crying and imaginative infant state? How dare he? :) Nicely expressed angst my friend. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 4/4/2017 3:06:00 PM Yep, probably for the better. :) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/4/2017 2:58:00 PM ...I was actually looking for an awfully embarrassing penis poem I wrote and (ugh) sent when I came across this number, probably for the best ;) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/4/2017 2:52:00 PM Yah, was dramatic, a literal hex display; fortunately he was the loather of poetry so no chance he'll be reading this here ;) xomo!

Poetprentice Dupins Date: 4/4/2017 12:26:00 PM My gosh the diction in this piece is amazing. "maturest mate to date has bitterly regressed to a child irate from man of logic to impish state" This rhyme, to me, has so many layers to it. Good one Mo! 7 Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 4/4/2017 2:49:00 PM Thank you thank you! ;) 'twas a visceral moment. xomo!