Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Rhyme

Go Ahead I Dare Ya Breakup Poetry No One Should See

And He
my dearest
maturest mate to date
has bitterly regressed
to a child irate
from man of logic
to impish state
a hexer vile
filled with hate
while I don't believe
I've changed a bit
he thinks me evil
my mother split
as saccharin 
as the Harpie race
bewitching temptress
evil face
necessity
I do suppose
for his childish fit
to so dispose


Dug out of an old journal for John Lawless' Go Ahead I Dare Ya!!! Contest

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Line Gauthier October 16, 2017 at 7:31 PM Bravo been there too. Well said. Delightful little tirade. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 16, 2017 at 9:09 PM Tirade is the perfect word! ;) xomo!

Patricia Cresswell September 10, 2017 at 9:02 AM Love the description Maureen clear and no mistake. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 11, 2017 at 8:15 AM :) dear diary moment worth sharing

Darlene De Beaulieu April 29, 2017 at 2:59 PM Hello Maureen, glad that you have defended your poetry. A 7 Patricia Cresswell September 10, 2017 at 9:02 AM

Robert Padmore April 18, 2017 at 5:38 AM Very nice poetry Maureen, I love it when it sounds and fits perfectly. And especially when it relates to our lives! Well written a 7 Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 18, 2017 at 7:16 AM ;) thanks Robert! bless ya xomo

Freddie Robinson Jr. April 12, 2017 at 11:35 AM Oh my, this is one cool poem, Maureen! You possess so much verve in this wry, funny poem. He better not touch the wrong nerve. Keep on giggling at your own vitriol. Especially when you gotta let the thunder roll. You are one straight shooting sista. This poem got me smiling ear to ear. Your voice is so good to hear. Love and hugs, my dear. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 12, 2017 at 9:44 PM Your generous comment has my own smile popping out my ears! Thank you sweet Freddie, bless your soul xomo

Lim'Rik Flats April 12, 2017 at 8:58 AM Well heckfire, this was a treat with my morning coffee! I always appreciate a sharp scalpel;-) ~ john Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 12, 2017 at 9:38 PM Lovely! A note to self I never did intend to share I am elated it has entertained so ;) and the pen as sharp scalpel, them's fabulous poetic words John xomo!

Lisa Ricci April 8, 2017 at 1:14 PM Hello Maureen. Allow me to say the lion is alive and strong. I enjoyed the strength. You certainly met the contest requirements. Thank you for sharing. Best of luck with the contest. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 8, 2017 at 9:00 PM :) thank You Lisa!

Darren White April 6, 2017 at 3:23 AM Haha, I love this poem, and all the comments below made me laugh even harder (sorry) :) Good he was no marriage material for you Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 7, 2017 at 6:24 PM No apologies required! My sense of humour is very very well developed ;) x's n' o's!

Anne-Marie Coreggia April 4, 2017 at 9:56 PM Wow, Maureen, we sure heard your mighty justified roar loud and clear and I hope this awesome piece will bring you success in the contest :) Amitiés Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 5, 2017 at 5:56 AM :) thank You Anne-Marie! Joie! xomo

Carolyn Devonshire April 4, 2017 at 3:54 PM Oh no, he was the most mature of those you dated? I think you and I have waded in the same gene pool looking for love and finding a bitter child. You definitely fulfilled the contest theme, Maureen. Like the short lines and the rapid-fire descriptions of this "vile" lover. Wishing you success. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 4, 2017 at 4:09 PM Giggle ;) well heartbreak can bring out the worst in all of us. I'd say he grew up with our breakup, I "fixed him by breaking him", he was marriage material after me. Sigh. lol xomo!

Charmaine Chircop April 4, 2017 at 2:36 PM Oh Ioved this...I could hear you roar...And accepting the daring challenge...with a great response . Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 4, 2017 at 3:03 PM Thank you Charmaine; letting it all hang out ;) xomo!

Agnes Krampe April 4, 2017 at 2:18 PM Oh, I like this one. The short lines and repeat rhymes capture the fury well. Good luck in the contest. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 4, 2017 at 3:01 PM Thanks Agnes! Fury is a good word for it ;) xomo!

Jan Allison April 4, 2017 at 1:20 PM WOOOHHH You sure packed a punch with this one Maureen - love the choppy lines and the rhyme:-) I would love to hear this read out loud with venom in your voice!:-) am adding this to my faves think it's AWESOME:-):-) hugs jan xx Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 4, 2017 at 2:55 PM I am delighted you enjoy it so! Finding it after so long I gotta say it has me giggling at my own vitriol. Bless you! xomo :)

Chris Green April 4, 2017 at 12:45 PM Well, he did dare you and I see you answered that dare wonderfully. Don't you just hate when they revert back to that whining, crying and imaginative infant state? How dare he? :) Nicely expressed angst my friend. Chris Green April 4, 2017 at 3:06 PM Yep, probably for the better. :) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 4, 2017 at 2:58 PM ...I was actually looking for an awfully embarrassing penis poem I wrote and (ugh) sent when I came across this number, probably for the best ;) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 4, 2017 at 2:52 PM Yah, was dramatic, a literal hex display; fortunately he was the loather of poetry so no chance he'll be reading this here ;) xomo!

Poetprentice Dupins April 4, 2017 at 12:26 PM My gosh the diction in this piece is amazing. "maturest mate to date has bitterly regressed to a child irate from man of logic to impish state" This rhyme, to me, has so many layers to it. Good one Mo! 7 Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 4, 2017 at 2:49 PM Thank you thank you! ;) 'twas a visceral moment. xomo!