Gluttony
The seed of my fall
was sowed when in small,
certain twist of fate,
both were working late.
Papers flew to frame you wings
while a hunger pulled my strings,
and in the blues of your gaze,
did my heaven and hell blaze.
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Date: 25 / 01 / 2017
There are two types of Jueju poems. The first stanza is in Wujue (5 syllables each lines); the second stanza is in Qijue (7 syllables each line).
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