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Glowing Within

I will remember most shades of gray hues as waves of tears ebb, staining night’s inked breath while lost esteem grates; my heart grows numb pressed by doubt’s weeds till glints of light filter moist eyes... soft breeze hums dulcet chime to whisper, ‘love glows within me’ By: nette onclaud Form: Diminished Hexaverse Topic: Love yourself Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2013 6:13:00 PM

wow, I can see how you won. VERY nice one, Nette. WIsh I had done mine this way.

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 9/5/2013 4:49:00 PM

Splendid piece, Nette.Great write.,Congrats on your win...kudos to you.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/3/2013 2:22:00 PM

Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2013 9:25:00 PM

a nice loving yourself winning poem...Linda

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/2/2013 9:17:00 PM

This is a beauty, Nette! Congratulations on a very fine and deserving win! Love, Annalise

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/2/2013 6:30:00 PM

beautiful Congrats on your win. Morgan

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/2/2013 5:28:00 PM

This is a perfect description of the journey we take to self-worth. Beautifully written......yes ! Congratulations Nette!

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/2/2013 2:29:00 PM

beautiful write...congrats on your big win :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/2/2013 8:23:00 AM

Congrats nette..good work, as always. BG

Bidhu Patnaik

Date: 9/2/2013 4:32:00 AM

Congratulations for your win as well as the self discovery ....It's a remarkable poem..Bidhu

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/2/2013 4:06:00 AM

Beautifully written! Congrats ! Hugs

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/1/2013 2:25:00 PM

Nette, congrats on your 1st place win with this eloquently written poem! Love, Kim

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2013 1:19:00 PM

enjoyed your poem and Topic, Nette :-) Congrats! ~SKAT~

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/1/2013 1:19:00 PM

Beautiful! Congratulations

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/1/2013 10:13:00 AM

nette, this is is more than merely beautiful ... it radiates such hope. Thank you for the honor in your "softly sensual" contest. I am humbled beyond words:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2013 6:55:00 AM

- This became a winning poem, it was really deserved, Nette. - CONGRATULATIONS!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/5/2013 7:42:00 AM

Nette, a beautiful piece! absolutely love it :) xxhugsxx

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/4/2013 7:59:00 PM

I just know that your heart will never stop seeing the forces of love, you are filled with it my friend! I really enjoyed read this exceptional poem that you have written so eloquently Nette! I am quite impressed with this particular piece as you have gone above even your level of poetry, what an phenomenal poem, Great Work!!

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/4/2013 4:43:00 PM

Fine sentiments well expressed! Nice use of this form! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/4/2013 1:51:00 PM

Hi Sweetie. I think this is my favorite poem of yours...I connect with it very well! :) Absolutely beautiful...fantastic ending...melodic and sweet. Hugs

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/4/2013 1:26:00 PM

Let it shine...let it shine, even through the fog. Be that lighthouse for humanity & self. Beautifully done.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/4/2013 12:50:00 PM

Love grows..Great sentiment..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for dropping by..Soup mail soon..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 7/4/2013 12:22:00 PM

wow!!An amazing Hexaverse here Nette!Enjoyed very much!

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/4/2013 11:12:00 AM

Excellent secret picture you have adorned with sweet feelings and depicted with beautiful words. Lovely done my friend. It's a creation indeed. Loved always, bl