Nette Onclaud Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Glowing Within

I will remember
most shades of gray hues
as waves of tears ebb,
staining night’s inked breath
while lost esteem grates;

my heart grows numb
pressed by doubt’s weeds
till glints of light
filter moist eyes...

soft breeze hums
dulcet chime
to whisper,

‘love glows
within

me’




By: nette onclaud
Form: Diminished Hexaverse
Topic: Love yourself Contest

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Andrea Dietrich September 5, 2013 at 6:13 PM wow, I can see how you won. VERY nice one, Nette. WIsh I had done mine this way.

Olusegun Arowolo September 5, 2013 at 4:49 PM Splendid piece, Nette.Great write.,Congrats on your win...kudos to you.

Debbie Guzzi September 3, 2013 at 2:22 PM Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A September 2, 2013 at 9:25 PM a nice loving yourself winning poem...Linda

Audrey Haick September 2, 2013 at 9:17 PM This is a beauty, Nette! Congratulations on a very fine and deserving win! Love, Annalise

Danesh Morgan September 2, 2013 at 6:30 PM beautiful Congrats on your win. Morgan

Carrie Richards September 2, 2013 at 5:28 PM This is a perfect description of the journey we take to self-worth. Beautifully written......yes ! Congratulations Nette!

Sandra Adams September 2, 2013 at 2:29 PM beautiful write...congrats on your big win :)

Barbara Gorelick September 2, 2013 at 8:23 AM Congrats nette..good work, as always. BG

Bidhu Patnaik September 2, 2013 at 4:32 AM Congratulations for your win as well as the self discovery ....It's a remarkable poem..Bidhu

Cecilia Macfarlane September 2, 2013 at 4:06 AM Beautifully written! Congrats ! Hugs

Kim Merryman September 1, 2013 at 2:25 PM Nette, congrats on your 1st place win with this eloquently written poem! Love, Kim

Skat A September 1, 2013 at 1:19 PM enjoyed your poem and Topic, Nette :-) Congrats! ~SKAT~

Richard Lamoureux September 1, 2013 at 1:19 PM Beautiful! Congratulations

Karen Anglesey September 1, 2013 at 10:13 AM nette, this is is more than merely beautiful ... it radiates such hope. Thank you for the honor in your "softly sensual" contest. I am humbled beyond words:)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2013 at 6:55 AM - This became a winning poem, it was really deserved, Nette. - CONGRATULATIONS!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels July 5, 2013 at 7:42 AM Nette, a beautiful piece! absolutely love it :) xxhugsxx

Russell Sivey July 4, 2013 at 7:59 PM I just know that your heart will never stop seeing the forces of love, you are filled with it my friend! I really enjoyed read this exceptional poem that you have written so eloquently Nette! I am quite impressed with this particular piece as you have gone above even your level of poetry, what an phenomenal poem, Great Work!!

Matthew Anish July 4, 2013 at 4:43 PM Fine sentiments well expressed! Nice use of this form! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Eileen Manassian July 4, 2013 at 1:51 PM Hi Sweetie. I think this is my favorite poem of yours...I connect with it very well! :) Absolutely beautiful...fantastic ending...melodic and sweet. Hugs

Poet Tacito July 4, 2013 at 1:26 PM Let it shine...let it shine, even through the fog. Be that lighthouse for humanity & self. Beautifully done.

Sara Kendrick July 4, 2013 at 12:50 PM Love grows..Great sentiment..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for dropping by..Soup mail soon..Sara

Kash Poet July 4, 2013 at 12:22 PM wow!!An amazing Hexaverse here Nette!Enjoyed very much!

Bl Devnath July 4, 2013 at 11:12 AM Excellent secret picture you have adorned with sweet feelings and depicted with beautiful words. Lovely done my friend. It's a creation indeed. Loved always, bl