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Glorious Days Under the Sun

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He awakens me at dawn with the touch of his first light His warmth opens my azure bloom after the chill of night I'm refreshed with the gift of reborn splendor from the sun A Morning Glory on tendril vine, once day has begun My gold stamen dances to attract thirsty hummingbirds I wish I could express my gratefulness in human words but he knows I adore him when he sees my big blue smile Although in the garden, I'm considered a juvenile It's time for the sun to sleep as he recedes in the West So I'll close my eyes 'til morning, and take a little rest ~ ~ September 19th, 2017 ~ ~ Personification of Plant Contest Hosted by: Kim Rodrigues

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Harshita Chaudhary

Date: 10/8/2017 8:19:00 AM

Very beautiful poem. Congrats for your win

John Michaels

Date: 10/7/2017 6:17:00 AM

Exquisite imagery, Lin. Big congratulations on your First-Place win! Regards, John.

Thresha Reese

Date: 10/1/2017 11:48:00 AM

PURTY! Well done :-)

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/28/2017 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations Lin!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/28/2017 7:26:00 AM

Back to bestow congratulations dear poetess! Hugs and love too :) xomo!

Roy Pett

Date: 9/28/2017 4:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Lin. :))

Jan Allison

Date: 9/28/2017 3:54:00 AM

I knew this would be a big winner for you Lin:-) Congrats on your trophy win!:-) You have an incredible talent in both art and poetry and i can't wait to see your hummingbird pic when its finally done:-) hugs jan xx

Kevin Shaw

Date: 9/28/2017 3:13:00 AM

Hello Lin, This is a fantastic poem and makes me feel so warm. You have a wonderful use of description that brings a blank canvas to life. I think my effort was bottom of the class with a note from the teacher, "Must try harder" Kind regards to you, Kevin x

Constance La France

Date: 9/28/2017 1:43:00 AM

Lin, congratulations on your trophy win with this lovely personification and I love your image too !

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/27/2017 10:15:00 PM

Just a gorgeous and expressive write - enjoyed this very much. Congrats on your well-deserved win, Lin!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/27/2017 8:40:00 PM

A beauty of a poem Lin. Congratulations! :)

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 9/27/2017 8:36:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Lin!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/27/2017 8:29:00 PM

Lovely images! A wonderful write, Lin! Congratulations on your first place win! Hugs, Kim :)

Roy Pett

Date: 9/20/2017 12:40:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful Lin, you have painted a picture with your words that's as beautiful as the image, GL in contest.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/19/2017 9:00:00 PM

This is so very beautiful my friend! I just loved this incredibly wondrous and delightful poem this evening! You have enthralled me by this Personification, wow, you have surely written a magnificent piece! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2017 2:02:00 PM

- A beautiful poem, Lin ... feels so peaceful and delicious - Best wishes in the contest - "big blue smile"// Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane
Date: 9/19/2017 7:24:00 PM

Thanks for your sunshine, Anne-Lise.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/19/2017 1:12:00 PM

What wonderful imagery Lin, morning glories are so pretty and the accompanying picture is delightful. I would really love to see a hummingbird for real:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/21/2017 7:27:00 PM

No we don't have them here Lin:-(Please let me see a copy of your pic when you paint it:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 9/19/2017 1:15:00 PM

Oh, Jan. I'm saddened that you've never seen a hummingbird. Are they not found on the Isle of Mann? Thanks for finding delight in the poem and the painting. I think I'd like to paint a version of this one...love the soft jewel tone colors.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/19/2017 12:51:00 PM

Oh the morning glories! Such a rich write. A pleasure to read, a winner if I had any say. My best to you in the contest dear poetess. xomo

Lin Lane
Date: 9/19/2017 1:06:00 PM

As much as it is a pleasure for me to always read your awesome comments. Thanks a bunch, Mo xo