Afolabi Muideen Poet Rhyme

Glorification

If bristles are mouth
I shall use them to praise
And my hairs are mouth
I shall use them to praise
For He's leading my way upon the choice I made
For roads are many and manta devours my head
In an abyssal ocean; brain drenched of ideation,
Still I swam a fish hope for season
To change to dry, to dry my brain
Oh! Poor soul in complication
As a beetle lifting a huge rock
With its sucking jaw or beak
When difficulty comes one's means
One might turn into a goose
Little fishes of land giggled and
Stabbed me with outwards.
Um! To God be the glory
The choice I made for poetry
Gave me true dimple grin
As two lovers face each with grin
Till my night was brightened
By bright light shines as gold
Orginated from the moon.


9/10/15

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Bl Devnath September 17, 2015 at 11:29 AM Excellent poem my lovely friend read from you. Well penned. 7 i feel. Loved always, bl

Constance La France September 14, 2015 at 6:05 PM AM, you have penned some wonderful lines, well done and thanks for visiting my poem, after the rainstorm ..

Sara Kendrick September 14, 2015 at 5:40 PM Interesting work that you have penned..Way to go ..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 14, 2015 at 9:13 AM Imagery is just fantastic Afolabi~Olive Eloisa =`)

Arthur Vaso September 14, 2015 at 12:30 AM Glorious and beautiful!

Nette Onclaud September 12, 2015 at 2:27 AM wow, such lustrous imagery, afolabi... grraaet work!.. huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis September 11, 2015 at 7:03 AM You seem to sail upon the archipelago of poetry trying to find the most appropriate shore for a safe anchoring. Adventurous and challenging writing, my friend, A.M.!

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2015 at 9:49 PM wow, this is got some very interesting imagery. You remind me of a modern Psalmist! Afolabi Muideen September 19, 2015 at 3:44 PM Thank you Andrea, God worthy of being praise every time because his presence in our life is unpredictable. I love your kind comment. Stay blessed.

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2015 at 9:48 PM Hey, did I ever tell you that A.m was MY initials too? Before I married! With my middle initail, I was ARM!! let me read this new poem now. Afolabi Muideen September 19, 2015 at 3:40 PM Hi Andrea, yes you did tell me you are ARM but you don't tell it full meaning. I really appreciate your comment to my page it always kind and uplift one.

Justin Bordner September 10, 2015 at 7:31 PM Your style is avant garde to me Afolabi, it's use of thought forms is awesome, new ways of expression...ingenius! In poetry we find our origin, in love we know our magic. The way that you illustrate your relationship with God, Poetry, and the one you love is very powerful to me. J.A.B. A FAV! Afolabi Muideen September 11, 2015 at 4:00 PM Thank you for your kind words I do appreciate it

Tim Smith September 10, 2015 at 10:48 AM A great use of imagery here A.M....good luck in the contest....Tim Afolabi Muideen September 11, 2015 at 3:48 PM Thanks dropped by to read and comment to my page

Michael Tor September 10, 2015 at 9:56 AM Very nice Afolabi. Good luck in the contest. Afolabi Muideen September 11, 2015 at 3:42 PM Thanks dropped by to read and comment

Richard Lamoureux September 10, 2015 at 9:25 AM I like your interpretation of this contest. I wish you well and suspect this will do well. Afolabi Muideen September 11, 2015 at 3:32 PM Thank you for your pleasant comment I do appreciate it