Joe Maverick Poet Dramatic Verse

Gloopy Soup

Word shadows that are near and by, 
I need your input that I may try
the help you give is hard to say,
So! I'll employ the pen (today) 
come!visit me with your touch and sway
and keep me from a loathsome crime!..
employing all that prose & rhyme,
Oh! (yes) that's it! I know! I'll write. 
you poetry soupers
are outta sight!!!

© joe maverick 2010

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Robin Davis February 13, 2014 at 2:57 PM Joe This is cute and creative. The Soup will keep you out of jail for being bad. HHHMMM Now you are in poetry prison and we wont let you free. LOL Thanks for the awesome comment on my Society's Ignorance poem

Poet Destroyer A February 15, 2013 at 4:54 PM JOE :-).... , hope your days are filled with joy... stopping by to say HI!:-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Always~ PD"

Daver Austin February 11, 2013 at 11:59 AM Yep! The name of the poetry game is communication. I always detect the urgent need for communication in your writing, Joe. Me too. One needs the input. I get nothing out of a comment that doesn't show some sort of communication. If it doesn't communicate, pass it over. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2013 at 6:13 PM returning to this fun one. Love the word gloopy. Always nice seeing you,Joe.

Poet Destroyer A December 9, 2012 at 4:27 PM Hello Joe.thank you for the smiles... and i love the way you employ your pen,,, talking about pens, you need to employ another wonderful poem...:-) :-) ..pd

Michelle Mac Donald May 13, 2012 at 7:17 PM Oie, I can't imagine you commiting a dastardly crime, Joe! However, your writes certainly bring peace and joy to the readers! This "Gloopy Soup" is deliciously fine!:) Wishing you and yours the best!! Love, Mikki

Carol Sunshine Brown June 2, 2011 at 6:37 AM While stopping by to read some of your amazing poetry I would like to thank you for your comments on my poetry. Your words are always appreciated Joe. May the sun always shine down upon you and fill your soul with inspiration. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A November 13, 2010 at 1:11 AM what a specail poem Joe,, i'm gonna enjoy reading your poetry,,, adding you to my favorite poets,,, have a nice one,,.p.d.

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2010 at 3:17 PM hahaha, if this is all it takes to keep you from a life of crime. hey, just keep reading poems here and penning your cute ones too! Luv, Andrea Ps glad to meet a guy not enamored of football! heehee

Carol Sunshine Brown October 5, 2010 at 9:57 AM A pleasure to read your poetry today Joe. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse October 4, 2010 at 6:35 PM as in from mars or venus?? lol thanks for the poem!! You are a real Maverick of thought processes... LOL

Barbara Gorelick October 4, 2010 at 5:44 PM Nice..sometimes WAY out of sight...lol BG

Dr.Ram Mehta October 4, 2010 at 5:17 PM Very creative piece on Gloopy soup, Joe

Chuck Keys October 4, 2010 at 4:30 PM cute, enjoyable and thanks for thinking of us, chuck