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Gloop-Gloop

iv'e turned the heat to maximum, and thrown in quite a lot, that saucepan lids sure jumping,the liquid must be hot! i might get moans bad comment..? you never really know and i'm told i can't use square words..! in case their tempers blow.! now i know my styles unorthodox'' a trial no doubt in truth, i think i should give it all i've got, plus more (verbiage) perhaps rough-cut or... uncouth.? no! i'd better not get heavy in case indegestion looms, oh..bother i'll just serve it as it is, and use the extra large soup spoons..! yess.. they won't get in one full helping, at least not at a thyme, the lumps for those with a nose for prose, for the others some soupy rhyme.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/2/2022 12:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a "Fun" write. Have a blessed/weekend................

Joe Maverick
Date: 7/3/2022 6:28:00 AM

Hi Paula, I can't remember The contest now? I have looked but can't see it.' Thank you btw '

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 2/23/2019 7:13:00 AM

superb RHYME

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/26/2019 8:56:00 AM

Hello Mhatab, most kinx of you to leave a comment.'

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2013 11:11:00 PM

I remember this one and some of the parts so funny Just passing by to say hello, Joe!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2010 3:17:00 PM

hahaha, soupy rhyme and lumps for the prose nose. Cute lines!!! Thanks for your comments, Joe. Luv, Andrea

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 11/5/2010 9:54:00 AM

Nothing like a good helping of Poetry Soup to get the day going, Joe. You did it for me with this one! Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/4/2010 4:32:00 AM

I am sorry to hear that you won't be sharing with us for a while but we all need to time to reflect and be filled from time to time.Sometimes our cup gets empty and we nothing to overflow into the saucer to share with others.Come back soon with some great works for us to read.I apreciate you stopping by and commenting on my write "Had Times Been Different".This was about my father.He was diagnosed with depression in his late seventies or early eighties.The last years of his life was better.Sara

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/29/2010 11:23:00 AM

This is really funny, Joe, especialy the last few lines! I have a "nose for prose" but end up spending time with "soupy rhyme" anyway. Great poem! Diane

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/27/2010 8:30:00 AM

I hope you will be returning soon to the soup, Joe

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/26/2010 3:33:00 PM

Hope you don't go!!! Stay and play a while.

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/26/2010 3:10:00 PM

this will be my last poem that i am posting on p s for a time, i am not going away, i will look in regular as i can, and will post again if something seems exeptional, and might be enjoyable to you good people,however i think i need some time for reflection,so until you hear from me best wishes to all.