Gloop-Gloop
iv'e turned the heat to maximum, and thrown in quite a lot,
that saucepan lids sure jumping,the liquid must be hot!
i might get moans bad comment..? you never really know and
i'm told i can't use square words..! in case their tempers blow.!
now i know my styles unorthodox'' a trial no doubt in truth,
i think i should give it all i've got, plus more (verbiage)
perhaps rough-cut or... uncouth.? no! i'd better not get heavy
in case indegestion looms, oh..bother i'll just serve it as it is,
and use the extra large soup spoons..! yess.. they won't get in
one full helping, at least not at a thyme, the lumps for those with a nose for
prose,
for the others some soupy rhyme.
Copyright © Joe Maverick | Year Posted 2010
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