Gloomy Reflections On the Demise of Our Beloved Mother

We gathered to lay her in the cold ground; 
it was to be her resting place—poor Mom!
Grieving, I sobbed while my siblings were calm;
only I appeared distraught and unsound,
overwhelmed at the sudden loss I found
too great to bear. It was like a huge bomb
had exploded in my life—like napalm!
As I sat with tears flowing and profound, 
the eulogy was then delivered to all. 
We buried her on a cold, wintry morn;
all were mute, as I felt a gloomy pall. 
Among them I wept, so bereft and torn
was I during the funeral withal:
all the while, I felt gloomy and forlorn.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Marcum Wong Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 3:30 AM
An unexpected death can hit you like a ton of bricks. You can't breathe without sobbing and the pain is unbearable. You describe this brilliantly in your lovely sad poem Ngoc. Congratulations on your win!
A   Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:20 PM
Nqoc. Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA
Mehta Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 1:31 AM
Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul, ngoc
A  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 10:12 PM
Nqoc, you put A lot of Heart And Soul into your writing, enjoyed your winning poem.... Love ~SKAT~
Walker  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 7:27 PM
Ngoc, congratulations on the win! Verlena
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