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Gloom Love

(19/08/2011) We fought a lot for no reason Can’t believe that our last was my tomb In the end, I will always search for you But for you, all I only gave was gloom

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Sean Claudine

Date: 9/29/2011 11:54:00 AM

nice, visual created by your artistic words, seems as if you experienced.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/24/2011 6:46:00 AM

Thought provoking write my dear friend.. We all live and breathe your lines at times....I have a new blog up and contest ....hugs sent to you....Michael

Jack Horne

Date: 9/19/2011 5:17:00 PM

I think we've all been there, my friend. Lovely piece

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/15/2011 5:36:00 PM

sad thoughts.....seems we have this love hate relationship at times.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/15/2011 9:35:00 AM

I guess you remind me that we aren't always at our best in a relationship. You bring to light the need to be more loving. A sensitive verse on neglect Dinda.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/15/2011 8:02:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Dinda. Let the words continue to flow from your pen. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/14/2011 12:29:00 PM

sad yet sweet Dinda.. many luv experiences teach lessons ..some hurtful ..some pleasant .. all necessary to find the one true luv out there.. luv.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/14/2011 11:30:00 AM

I think your most powerful line is your 2nd line - would you consider reorganizing this so that gloom is at the beginning and tomb is at the end? just a thought...susan