Glittering Ocean Surface

The ocean's surface glitters, Reflecting the eyes of all, As smiling spectators gather, To witness nature's call. The waves crash against the shore, In a mesmerizing dance, As the sun's rays shine down, Creating a sparkling trance. The colors of the water, Are ever-changing and bold, As the deep blues turn to greens, And the purples start to unfold. The creatures of the deep Are hidden from our view, But their presence can be felt. In the way the water subdue. The ocean's surface glitters, In a display of pure delight, As we stand in awe and wonder, At its magnificent sight.
Written: June 09, 2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lane Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 7:34 PM
A wonderfully imagined series of verses, Lasaad. Forgive my lack of commenting. I’m still dealing with the flu.
Lindley Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 4:48 PM
The imagery brought to mind when ready such masterful poetry is awesome. Th oceans are indeed one of God's many wonders here for all of mankind. Truly fine poetry my friend. A fav... God bless
Baker Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 3:07 PM
I could feel the thrill of those standing or lounging on the beach. Exquisite rhyming and your words flowed smoothly throughout the entire poem. I enjoy your poetry again today, my friend. Bill
Kendrick Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 2:49 PM
Ahhh!!! The rhyme, flow and rhythm of this lines is excellent. I enjoyed reading this one today and it reminded me of how much I enjoy going to see the ocean. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Pandit Avatar
June 9, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Oceans are awesome wonders of nature---you certainly captured their revelry--indeed a magnificent sight!
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