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Glints of Sunset

sunset glints on the park, reflecting torn leaves frozen by a bitter wind. 1/27/2016 PD's Contest Monoku or ONE LINE poem #3 (old/new)

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Date: 2/10/2016 5:45:00 PM
You write it so we can just picture it, Nette.BIG congrats on a top win.
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Date: 2/9/2016 5:03:00 PM
Nice imagery!! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/9/2016 4:30:00 PM
Excellent imaging with this line, Nette. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/9/2016 3:46:00 PM
hashtag #AWESOME IMAGERY #bitterlydeep :) LINDA
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Date: 2/9/2016 3:44:00 PM
Hello, Nette, Congratulations on your top rocking win. Stop by my latest blog "How Shocking" if YA like... AN honor to have you support my contest. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/9/2016 3:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/9/2016 3:25:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Nette! My dandelion seeds definitely went off with the wind...they failed to make the final:) hugs // paul
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Date: 1/30/2016 12:48:00 AM
lOVELY MONOKU, DEAR NETTE.
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Date: 1/27/2016 9:32:00 AM
The metaphors and imagery are perfect. Nice flow of words and a interesting poem with all the right stuff. Emile.
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Date: 1/27/2016 9:27:00 AM
Very beautiful, Nette; love the imagery which generates a mixed feeling of warmth and cold. gl in the contest:) hugs // paul
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Date: 1/27/2016 1:05:00 AM
Super imagery in your entry Nette. I am loving these.
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Date: 1/26/2016 7:58:00 PM
You sais a lot in a few words. Very evocative! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/26/2016 6:32:00 PM
I always enjoy single lines that encapsulate a moment and capture a memorable vision, and I certainly enjoyed this one.
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:26:00 PM
Very nice indeed Nette, best to you in the contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 1/26/2016 4:02:00 PM
very nice, Nette! I am loving these monoku lines at Soup!
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Date: 1/26/2016 1:42:00 PM
- A great picture, Nette ....... sounds cold - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/26/2016 1:20:00 PM
The standard of this verse is quite outstanding and as always,you use imagery to perfection! I had a swell time writing for your contest.
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Date: 1/26/2016 1:10:00 PM
Grand one-liner! How descriptive is the scene I could feel the play between sunset and bitterness of the wind. Thank you for your comments!
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