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Glint of Hope - Kimo Contest

Behind the lace veil lies a troubled heart …. Will she please this tall stranger Soon she will be his wife Veil is lifted she raised her eyes to see him …. Small glint of hope in his eyes A small smile she returns Penned 26 May 2014

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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 5/28/2014 12:25:00 PM
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What a lovely Kimo, Seren. I wish you success in the contest. I am sending you a soup mail so I can email a copy of the birthday booklet to you. Love, Carolyn
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2014 1:29:00 PM
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Hi Carolyn, have sent u an e mail. looking forward to seeing your booklet. Thanks for stopping by .....Seren
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/28/2014 12:10:00 AM
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this reminds me of a Muslim wedding or something. I really like it and the way they looked at each other in the end.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2014 2:32:00 AM
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Yes Andrea had that in mind when I wrote it......thanks ...Seren
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/26/2014 7:11:00 AM
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Beautiful Kimos Seren.... I think the bride to be is quite often not sure if she is marrying the right man...hugs Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/28/2014 2:33:00 AM
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Thanks Tim wasn't sure how to write a Kimo....Seren

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