Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Glimpses of Autumn

Horizon imprints blazing joy, where autumn blushes amber sky
Glistening meadows of gilded season, adorning tinted russet dye
As amethyst winds of eventide flutter leaves on crimson trees
Flickering rays of golden twilight, glinting sigh of ochre breeze.   

Pleasing sights, saffron colors merrily bounce, staging air-dance
Whirling leaves in panoramic vistas, hypnotizing glance of romance
As fiery gamboge hills oscillate, waltzing tenor of autumnal zeal
Dazzling lovers’ enchanted hearts in maple tree’s scarlet appeal.

Cooler weather permeates, graying charm of shortened days,
While browsing prairies of browning fields, cattle lazily graze;
Families gather sharing stories, crowding around warm fireplace
As festive season ushers in, serenading divinity of solemn grace.

September 12, 2020
Autumn–Fall Rhyme Challenge Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Linda Alice Fowler October 12, 2020 at 6:17 AM beautiful Vijay. I love your use of color in your poems. :) Linda

John Hamilton October 8, 2020 at 2:39 PM A wonderful write Vijay, but that is what we've come to expect with you.

Angela Crabtree October 5, 2020 at 9:16 AM A beautiful picture of Autumn painted in words, Vijay. :)

Jennifer Proxenos September 24, 2020 at 8:49 AM Vivid imagination and excellent creative poetry and congratulations my friend on a very well deserved win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit September 29, 2020 at 8:10 AM Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate, my friend.

Judy Ball September 23, 2020 at 2:58 PM So beautifully worded Vijay. You paint such a lovely picture here. Loved it. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 5:41 AM Thank you Judy--much appreciate.

M. L. Kiser September 22, 2020 at 2:09 PM Beautifully penned Vijay; such wonderful imagery in this piece. Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 5:41 AM Much appreciate. Many thanks, MLK.

Supraja Kannan September 21, 2020 at 10:18 AM Such a beautiful poetry,Vijay. Lovely imagery and congratulations on your well deserved win... Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 5:40 AM Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2020 at 10:20 AM Hey, Vijay, waiting for some new poems of yours. Hurry, a week has gone by!!! Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 5:40 AM Well, its finally ready and posted. Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Tania Kitchin September 18, 2020 at 3:17 PM Vijay, congratulations on your winning placement with your gorgeous Autumn poem, beautiful imagery! Vijay Pandit September 19, 2020 at 4:46 AM Much appreciate Tania--many thanks.

Nette Onclaud September 16, 2020 at 2:19 PM hi, vijay..got more?...huggs Vijay Pandit September 17, 2020 at 8:00 AM Soon. Thanks, Nette.

V. Deepa September 16, 2020 at 1:33 PM Wonderful glimpses of autumn dear Vijay sir:-) Sometimes need to re-read your poems.. coz i fail to understand your high vocabulary ..you teach me lot of new words..Thankyou.:-) Good luck for the contest.Enjoy your day.Take care.Warm regards coming your way.:-) Vijay Pandit September 16, 2020 at 1:53 PM You are always so generous with your feedback Deepa. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire September 16, 2020 at 11:19 AM I agree with Paul. Your poem recollects the style and imagery of the British Romantic Period. It flows beautifully with perfect rhyme, Vijay. Surely a winner in the contest and a fave for me. You are one of my favorite writers, right up there with the likes of Keats and Dickinson. Hugs, Carolyn Vijay Pandit September 16, 2020 at 1:51 PM I am humbled by your kindness my friend. I treasure your words that bestow such delight. Much appreciate your valued remarks, Carolyn. Many thanks, as always. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Andrea Dietrich September 15, 2020 at 3:14 PM you have penned it exactly right, Vijay! It's almost here officially , maybe in one week I think! Vijay Pandit September 15, 2020 at 3:37 PM That is so very nice of you--much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Paul Callus September 15, 2020 at 11:42 AM Truly beautiful, Vijay. Your vivid colourful imagery is reminiscent of Keats. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit September 15, 2020 at 3:37 PM Honored by your compliment, dear sir. Much appreciate Paul. Many thanks. Regards.

Janice Canerdy September 15, 2020 at 6:52 AM Another masterpiece, Vijay. Such an amazing scene you have described! Janice Vijay Pandit September 15, 2020 at 9:11 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues September 13, 2020 at 6:20 PM I love the image of families gathering around to share stories in this lovely imagery of Autumn! Vijay Pandit September 14, 2020 at 9:17 AM Much appreciate Kim--many thanks.

Joseph May September 13, 2020 at 4:41 PM You capture the colors of autumn well, Beautifully written Vijay, Vijay Pandit September 14, 2020 at 9:17 AM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose September 13, 2020 at 7:24 AM My dear friend, you are one of the very few people on this site that always drops in, as for that last poem it was written at 3 am, and it was closer to my heart then most poems. I'm glad you see me through the screen, its poets like you that make me want to stay on this site, Love and hugs xo Vijay Pandit September 13, 2020 at 9:04 AM Thank you my friend--yes--I really liked your poem on love. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Vienna.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 13, 2020 at 3:05 AM - Autumn is here with its beautiful colors, clear air and cooler days - It's still wonderful to be outside :) - A beautiful poem, Vijay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit September 13, 2020 at 9:03 AM Thank you Anne-Lise, for this wonderful feedback--much appreciate.

Victor Buhagiar September 13, 2020 at 2:13 AM Your challenge poem is of the highest standard. So many vistas in this enchanting poem sprinkled with perfect rhymes. I'm sure it will rate high. ~~ Vijay Pandit September 13, 2020 at 9:02 AM Appreciate the vote of confidence--especially from a gifted poet like you--many thanks, Victor.

Nette Onclaud September 12, 2020 at 10:28 PM with this glorious piece, autumn is on its way, vijay... love your couplets...huggs Vijay Pandit September 13, 2020 at 9:01 AM So very kind of you Nette--much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole September 12, 2020 at 8:24 PM "amethyst winds of eventide flutter leaves on crimson trees" I can see this image in my mind. So beautiful. You are an artist with your words. I am ready to curl around these moments. Allow Autumn to caress my world. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit September 13, 2020 at 9:00 AM Glad you liked the poem, Brandy. Appreciate your much valued remarks my friend--many thanks.

Heidi Sands September 12, 2020 at 1:27 PM Oh, your muse is on a roll. This is so beautiful. Well done Vijay :) Vijay Pandit September 13, 2020 at 8:59 AM You are so kind, as always--much appreciate, Heidi--many many thanks.