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Michael J. Falotico

"gliding Proud"

Strong wings spread out wide

Sharp claws breaking through the air

With protective eyes..






Bald Eagle Contest

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2010

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Poet Destroyer A

December 10, 2012 at 8:19 PM

on the 11th day of x-mass my true love gave to me.. 11 gliding eagles ~~10 warming warmers ~~ 9 ladies souping~~ 8 cherished moments~~ 7 sexy sins~~ 6 sipping cups~~ 5 moments of you and me....4 kissing songs.. 3 old pens.. 2 cradles of love ... and a warm place in his arms and fair tree....

October 14, 2010 at 8:35 PM

Many congratulations Michael for this HM.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 14, 2010 at 8:14 PM

Congrats Michael on your win in the contest and your special HM ... for this magnificent write luv.. enjoyed by your Jersey Girl forever..

Andrea Dietrich

October 14, 2010 at 8:02 PM

congrats on the HM, Michael. HOpe you are doing well today! Luv, Andrea

Carrie Richards

October 14, 2010 at 7:01 PM

This says it all...........and I love the simplicity of this haiku!! Beautiful !!! Congratulations, Michael!

Barbara Gorelick

October 14, 2010 at 5:02 PM

Glad to see your poem do well in the contest. BG

October 14, 2010 at 2:48 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

October 14, 2010 at 2:05 PM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Contest.Sandra

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 14, 2010 at 12:37 PM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Michael. Love, Carol

October 14, 2010 at 12:27 PM

Many congratulations Michael on your win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James

October 14, 2010 at 12:12 PM

Congratulations Michael on your success with this Haiku. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

October 14, 2010 at 9:43 AM

Nice work, Michael. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

October 12, 2010 at 1:07 AM

Oh yes this so good, good luck in contest. Harry

Constance La France

October 11, 2010 at 2:07 PM

I think it is beautiful, Michael, very visual, I love it ....

Doris Culverhouse

October 10, 2010 at 2:15 PM

Well written...great perspective on he eagle.

Poet Destroyer A

October 10, 2010 at 1:40 PM

protective they are, nice write for the contest, good luck...P.D.

October 10, 2010 at 9:16 AM

Great title and visuals with your entry Michael. Wishing all the best for the contest. Enjoy your Sunday. Love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

October 10, 2010 at 7:45 AM

Love that second line, Michael! And great title for this challenge haiku! LUv, Andrea

October 10, 2010 at 6:30 AM

Reads like the eagle that I have on my desk looking at me at this moment in time...Sara

October 10, 2010 at 6:11 AM

very picturesque ..can almost see that bird..best of luck if for Carolyn's contest..Take care~Deb

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